Moesha's (shicola) Reviews

Moesha

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13 Public Reviews Given

13 Total Reviews Given

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#4042737

Review of Twin Flames

Review by Moesha

Rated: E

| (4.0)

This is a beautiful love story. I like how you personally put your relationship into this. It makes it more relatable. To see that you're happy in your relationship warms my heart.

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#4042704

Review of Bubble Guts

Review by Moesha

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Oh wow. This poem is very different. Its like a comedy that never ends. Its funny how you describe farts and stuff. Im very girly so..yeah good job!!

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#4042680

Review of 5 Sense Poem

Review by Moesha

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Your poem was great. it flowed very well. i loved your word choice, it works very well. my facorite line was " The vengence of whip torturing to death with a hateful heart." i would have loved if it was longer, and spaced out into stanzas with some more details. also you had ery good imagery, but i would like to have seen more.

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#4040270

Review of Bully

Review by Moesha

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I like this poem because lots of people go through bullying. Whether their being bullied or their the bully.

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Review of Angels

Review by Moesha

Rated: E

| (3.5)

This poem is really good. It really appeals to the individuals that done lost a(n) person in their life. Everyone has lost someone or will eventually lose someone in their life. This poem proves that no one will live forever. Everyone has to die and God does have to call his children home.

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Review of All alone

Review by Moesha

Rated: E

| (1.0)

I really like the wording of this poem. Not saying it wasn't good but it was very hard to understand. I didn't understand the connection between the little boy and the sad and lustful woman. If the woman was sad than how could she be full of lust? "So transparent the little girl inside.." I really love that line but I don't really understand it at all. I'm sorry but this poem would really use a lot of work

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#4040194

Review of Holding me back

Review by Moesha

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I love this poem. I like how it tells the truth on what it it to start over. Some people do have to surrender their dreams not because they what to but because they have no other choice. I like how this poem puts in perspective that sometimes your dreams don't come true but that doesn't mean there impossible.