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Review by Karen Smyth Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Though there were a few grammatical and typo errors, this would be a good base for something incredible. You should combine more paragraphs together and add more details. Then, it would be perfect!

P.S. Do you think you could check out my poem and give me advise? It would be amazing to see if there was something I could improve.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This is amazing! It's hard to write poetry, but you make it seem so simple.
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