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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi GERVicious Ghoul,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is intense and full of love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who will not leave the one they love. I am hoping that the speaker will always be loved by their partner. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The Lyrical Sonnet poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Beck,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have given the reader an introduction to your latest novel, you target market and a summary of the plot. The reader is delighted with the look they get at your latest project. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Family  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Maria,

This is a wonderful story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering how Cynthia will try to get her parents' attention. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a young girl who feels unloved. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story focuses on Cynthia, and she comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across a few structural issues that need your attention:


1)for once notice=-"notice" should be "noticed".

2)Cynthia felt like an outcast in her house so she decided to run away-There should be a comma after "house".

3)She stood up, took her bags and went back to her parent She knelt down and apologized to them.-Should read "She stood up, took her bags and went back to her parents. She knelt down and apologized to them."

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Rick,


This is a fantastic story. The tone is tinged with anxiety and anticipation. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if this hum will drastically change communication as a whole eventually. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a man finds out about a hum which is said to slow down the speed with which computers do their job, and give people the gift of anticipation again. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The man revealing the remedy speaks like a real person. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of Marhan Prayer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Evignity S.W.X.,


This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering how the Marhan people ended up being so optimistic in the face of such a tragic history. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a people who keep an optimistic view of returning to their loved ones no matter what. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story focuses on the Marhan as a people, and they come across as real people. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)custum,-Should read "custom,"

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi closscie,


This is a fantastic essay. The title is direct and attention grabbing. You ask the reader a direct question and tell them what the essay will be about at the same time. The reader begins thinkin about their possible answers and are anxious to hear your thoughts on the subject. They will begin to read immediately. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about whether or not schools should have a recess period. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. When I went to school recess was fifteen minutes. Our hour break was for lunch. Both breaks us a chance to blow off some steam for the rest of the day, and I thought they were equally as important. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Measure  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi woodswoman,


This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about a boy who is taunted and teased because of his height. I love poems which tell stories. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of The Coming  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Alfred,


This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have reviewed a thriller novel that you enjoyed and would recommend. It sounds like a novel I would love to find. I loved the look I got at you as a person as well as a writer as I read. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of The Cage  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Waltz en France,


This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if the warrior will be able to escape his prison. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a warrior who is tricked and captured. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi tj,


This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if the pot of coffee made by the speaker will be ruined. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a couple spending Thanksgiving together invent a new drink when a pot of coffee is accidentally ruined. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Review of My reality  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi H.,


This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone who has created a vivid fantasy world to cope with the harshness of his life. I am hoping that the speaker will find a way to cope with life's difficulties other than fantasizing. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi Chrys,


This is a wonderful chapter. The chapter opens with details of Parker's life. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on Parker and the chapter. They will read to the last word. This is a fantastic opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. You have set up your main characters and plot very well for the reader. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. I did come across a couple of structural issues that need your attention:


1)"he's back."-"he's" should begin with a capital letter.

2)"Cause ole' man O'Keefe shot him and I hung him.-This is a piece of dialogue and needs to end with quotation marks.

The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi fyn,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of love and sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is a tribute to your friend Karen after her death. I am so sorry for your loss. Karen sounds like a delightful person. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Short Bio  
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Max,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. After reviewing you for so long I was anxious to read something personal about you and began to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on you and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written a autobiography of you and your career. I was delighted with the look I got at you as a person as well as an author. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi Mary,


This is a wonderful piece. The tone is formal. It suits the piece and plot very well. The reader is wondering what other things this man will do in his pursuit of the service of God. They will read to the last word to find out. The piece is about a man who becomes a preacher without really knowing what will be expected of him. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The piece concentrates on the man becoming a preacher, and he comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the piece. I did come across a couple of structural issues that need our attention:

1)You should break the piece up into sentences to make it easier to follow.

2)"i" should be capitalized when the character is referring to himself.

The piece is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi closscie,


This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. Anyone interested in chemistry, or a similar discipline, will anxiously begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the decomposition of plastic. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of SILENCE  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Naomi,


This review comes with a huge thank you for reviewing my poem. This is a fantastic essay. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the essay is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You introduce the topic with a comment about one of your favorite songs. I love "The Sound of Silence" as well. It was the first Simon and Garfunkel song I ever heard. You have written about your love of just being alone in silence. I love solitude as well. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Bikerider,


This is a fantastic story. The tone is intense and full of passion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Carrie will enjoy her first sexual experience with a woman. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a woman gets an unusual birthday gift. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Review of MARA MARA  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Kare,


This is a fantastic piece. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if the two people in the story will find a way to withstand the heat. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, two aliens struggle with deciding to either find a way to beat the heat on Earth or go home. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. You have left the description of setting and character appearance to the imagination of the reader. This is a useful tool which keeps the reader focused on the conflict. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Review of Two fisted Poem  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi fyn,


This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about your philosophy on human nature and how we treat each other, inspired by a story you heard on the news. I believe much like you, that we are more alike than different. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Lights  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jay,


This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone enjoying watching some bright white lights. There are many times I have enjoyed the peace of sitting and watching nothing in particular, just the lights and scenery around me: just to relax. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The Haiku poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. You have concentrated on one specific image here, the bright lights. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Early Frost  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jo,


This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the signs of coming Winter that someone observes while on a early morning hike. I dislike Winter and, usually, spend most of it wishing for Summer. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The Acrostic poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. You have used the phrase Early Frost very creatively in this poem. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of On Hellish Seas  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Alex,


This is a fantastic story. The tone is frenzied and sinister. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Charon has a life other that involves something other than sailing across the Styx River. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about Charon, the ferryman who sails the ship across the River Styx bringing souls to their final resting place. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature in very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on Charon, and he comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Bjorn,


This is a fantastic article. The title makes a statement without giving the reader any insight into what the article is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the article without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have contrasted the lives of two 18th century poets. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi hihohyena,


This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. In the poem a lamb gets separated from her flock and is protected by a loving goddess. I love poems which tell stories. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The poem has unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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