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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi elisabeth,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering how the child will have any success with a cactus. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a child who finds a cactus and, feeling sorry for the plant no one seems to like, takes it home and takes care of it. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on the child, and they come across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words . Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Wandering Thoughts,

These are fantastic lyrics. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The lyrics are doing what must be done to create an ideal world. I think that more can be accomplished to this end, but we have to work together. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the lyrics a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The lyrics flow extremely well. They are a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in these lyrics. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Without A Dream  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Theurgy,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering why the speaker cannot dream. They will read to the last word to find out. The poem is about someone who is troubled because they don't dream. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi helimarie,

This is a wonderful story. The tone is filled with wonder and peace. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what discoveries the speaker will find at Roca Vecchia. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about an archaeologist who is exploring an ancient site. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization are well developed and believable. The story concentrates on the archaeologist, and they come across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across a couple of structural issues that need your attention:


1)that once sood-Should read "that once stood".

2)kuman history.-Should read "human history".

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.
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Review of The Loons  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Luckie,

This is a wonderful story. The tone is tinged with peace and nervousness. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the speaker will go out again or stay go indoors to stay. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about someone who is startled by a flock of Loons. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on the speaker, and they come across a real person. There is only one piece of dialogue, and it is well done and realistic. The speaker speaks like a real person. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:




1)Faintly, I can hear a flapping sound, it gets louder by the second and my attention-There should be a comma after "second".

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of Veni, vedi, vici.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Cathrin,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is determined to beat another person in a battle of wills. I am wondering how this battle got started as I read. I read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi BrokenRing,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the aftermath of finding out your great love has betrayed you with someone else. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi chimgen,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You introduce the topic with a brief discussion of Wengui's conviction for fraud. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the crimes of Guo Wengui. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi aditri,

This is a wonderful story. The tone is filled with confusion and fear but abruptly changes to sinister and cold. This takes all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the speaker's wife can still be saved. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a man finds his wife drowned in the bathtub and calls for help. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is well developed and believable. The story concentrates on the husband, and he comes across as a real person. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of Ragged Doll  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi SB Musing,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of pain and sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about an incident in your life which caused you great pain and shame. I am hoping that you can find a way to put your life back together. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of WRITERS' PROMPTS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi woodswoman,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is frenzied and full of confusion and anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the struggle you have writing from prompts. I have heard that many people struggle with working from prompts. I have always found it easier to work from a prompt. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Whiskersandhersisters,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You introduce your topic by telling the reader of two instances in your life in which you found and read old pieces of writing of yours. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on you and the topic. They will read to the last word. You have written about how you have grown, and intend to keep growing, as a writer. The reader is delighted with the look they get at your writing journey, so far. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Akansha,

This is a wonderful article. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the article. The topic is pretty much universal, and the reader will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the article without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about the effects of bullying. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your read. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)In a few places you have neglected to double space between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Duality of Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi BrokenRing,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. This piece is about you and I began to read immediately to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the two sides of your personality. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Galahad  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Beholden,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of despair and anger. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering how Galahad ended up in the situation he is in. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a man in miserable circumstances stands up for a woman being threatened. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi TheRyanStar,

This is a fantastic piece. The tone is full of sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the if the father will be able to make his son understand how much the park meant to him. They will read to the last word to find out. In the piece, a father, and a tree express their sadness at the development that has gone on in a park. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. I love that you have given the tree a personality of its own. I love pieces that personify inanimate objects. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the piece. The piece is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jo,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how to be at peace with yourself and your place in the world. I have learned, a long time ago, that loving and being comfortable with yourself is the key to being happy and content in the world. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of WITTY BANTER  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Priscil,

This is a fantastic piece. The tone is intense. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Drake and Millicent are actually close. They will read to the last word to find out. The piece is about a woman who is demonstrating to a male companion how nasty she can be. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the piece. The piece is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Review of False Reality  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ashama,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with anxiety and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone grasping for truth in a world which only holds lies. I am hoping that the speaker will find the truth they are seeking in their life. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi VanillaSoftArt,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of delight and curiosity. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what kind of trouble Apple Bloom might get into. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a boy and girl indulging in their foot fetishes. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Anniyan_the_death,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have summarized your next project up to the Turning Point of the plot. The reader is delighted with the look they get at what you have planned for your next project. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of The Raven  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Frankie,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a woman who is done trying to find love after being betrayed. I am hoping that this woman will find a way to trust again. I read to the final word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The poem has a unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of The Mad Tailor  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Beholden,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of curiosity and disbelief. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the tailor did get scammed. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a tailor tries to convince an author that a watch he possesses is magical. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi paroem,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about whether or not one must take risks in order to grow up. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Harsh Hand  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Hill,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anguish and longing. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a group of people desperate to escape an oppressive environment. I am filled with sorrow for the people in the poem, and hope that find a way to gain their freedom. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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