Your way of gluing to the story is remarkable. I was completely hooked to the entire read and I like the three nuanced characters. The situation of three teens trying to do something dare-bare is actually quite amusing. Keep writing such amazing stories for this is your forte! I am surely going to mail you mate!
it is such a beautiful poem.you know its one of the best ones i have ever come across through.the pain and sorrow which you have describe through your mommie bears a somewhat contrast to your innocence in your childhood.the feeling of realization when you become mature and full further adds wonders to the poem.
i like the way you have written.it is extraordinary when i feel it with my eyes closed and your writings going through my head.it is a great feeling when i feel them.love is so much the same,from every walks of life it however sounds so different from everyone's point of view.great job.
you have written in such a beautiful way.i have become a fan of yours.your innocence is worth contemplating and i would personally believe that one comes out of its best when in sorrow or pain when in love.you have given your best and i like it.great job.keep up the good work
i like the concept that you have described about finding your strengths or as you rightly put it as finding the empowered you.your choice of words are pretty outstanding and i would like to applaud you the same.i have become a fan of your writing.great job!
i would like to say,i give in my sympathy to you from the bottom of my heart,and it touched my heart the way you have described your nephew,and ur relatives being stuck in the war.i condemn such atricitites in the mankind society that is so much prevalent.i would also pray for their well-being and their return to you.
i liked your concept.but it turned out to be a bit confusing in the end.why did you include the characters of kathy,jorge and kurt.was you whole point to explain that the once the main character becomes aware of he being in the plot,he wants to know the unscripted plot?anyways i kinda felt it could have been more of the mr.pennington and the fact tht you have left the story of the mr.pennington gave me to think of him more!
i would like to tell you,that you have written in such a good way.however your thoughts suggest you being done something bad.well i would like to inform you that we all are in the same page.and its good to be in sorrow,as the very best comes our when you feel yourself remorseful.but it is upto the user's creativity and it may differ.however your poem was really illuminating and i would like to appreciate your efforts that it is best to keep things to ourselves rather than shouting at roof-tops.
i found the story to be honest and it was written in a very beautiful way.i personally felt very bad for annie as she was just a fan who had her hearts out to mark.actually it happens every where and thats why i found it real.the only problem i did not understand is that how can white's mom know all this suddenly that annie had some connection to the mafia?nevertheless its a complete entertainer.great job
it is simply amazing. and i like it, the way you have described that there is no place like ur house mates. i like the fact that rhonda even after all her hard work and toil she gets it back through her kids and stephon
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