i'm speechless. this song/poem reminds me of the stuff i wirte, but never show to my boyfriend....good job... it's hard to make me speechless, but you managed to do the impossible.
wow, you do a really good job of portraying the man's sadness. apparently that's what my man would feel like if i just decided to shoot myself, which has looked promising at times....
wow....i don't even think i could pull that one off... i love the way you describe things...you make them seem real in the mind's eye, and you make people realize that we are all small, and no one can change that simple fact of life. brilliant job. i'd like to see more from you.
there are some people, such as myself, who believe there are more places to go than just heaven and hell...have you ever heard of purgatory? it's the choice of the soul, in my opinion, that determines where you will go after death. good job, besides my rants.
second time is almost always better, and this was definitely worth it. where do you get your talent? i read your profile, and i have to say that i enjoy the same authors you do, especially clemens and dickenson. : ) i love your work. it's some of the best that i've seen here! and i'm a newbie!
wow. that is seriously the best thing i have ever read, in my fifteen years of reading practically nonstop...taht was amazing. i can only wish i wrote like you do; you add so much detail and description, it makes me envious. i'd love to have your opinion of my work, so i can learn from the likes of you.
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