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I tend to review content and story itself more than proof read grammar and spelling. If I see something I will point it out. I prefer stories that are fictional, but am willing to review others.
I'm good at...
Catchong conflicts is a story. Things such as wrong character mentioned on something, to what seems to be an off action/reaction to something.
Favorite Genres
Science fiction, fantasy, adventure
Least Favorite Genres
Journalism
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Review by Silki Knight Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I find this interesting. I don't read many story stories, but I like this one. I do wish there was a bit more to it. More emphasis on her feelings and fear. I know what she's feeling buy I don't feel it myself.I also noticed a few spelling errors, her instead here sort if things. There was also some places that it seems like there were two sentences that need some sort of punctuation in between them. These are more finer editing points. The story itself is interestingAnd I think it has great potential.


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