I really like this story of a neighbourhood full of beautiful magnolias I love it in spring when all the flowers smell so fresh and beautiful. Its a nice story but there is only one little glitch the referencing when you use a quote from another source you need to either use a cambridge referencing system or a harvard one. But it needs to be more profesional merely stating where you got it from may be considered a plagarism. But its best to make sure. :D
cute poem about becoming a healthier person its a good resolution, drinking is a very bad habbit and when ever I go out I only drink a couple of beers or cocktails or hard liquers depending on what I feel like but I have gotten not drunk but tipsy. and when I drink I am very talkative and I drive people crazy :D
Is the beast a horse because they are beautiful creatures and I love them and they are very emotional and they understand us and can communicate to you very clearly, i always understand what a horse wants or if they are sad they make it very obvious. I really like your story poem.
Wow a lot of action I liked the story about dissun terry, spose not all horses are made for track racing, I personally prefer the sport of show jumping my self, track racing bores me I once worked at a track race club as a waitress. It's not that exciting but i think the prospect of possibly winning money from the race is what excites people. Over all a nice comedy.
This is by far the coolest story i have ever read about cute pigeons I love them. But Cher ami is a cool name to give to a bird, This story was very creative in it's own way you must have won the writing competition with this story well done. Keep writing these nice stories. :D
Cool story! but how come the old man didnt still money at the bank or did he? and how come the police didnt figure that he shot the cop. Wow it's an interesting story I wonder what the law will be like whithin 20 years or so, I dont think it would be as easy going as cleaning up a crime scene that that the criminal creates. I think the law will get tougher. but over all I really like the story.
I liked that you wrote a poem for a good friend that has passed away, It is very sad and depressing when we lose our friends and family. I am sure your message went through to your loved one. It's a pretty long poem I havent written one thisn long yet Im practicing with little ones first Hope fully I'll get good at it. :D
Wow I like mythical creatures and fantasy stories I imagined a scene from lord of the rings for some reason I dont know why my head works very randomly. I like your poem but honestly I think a dark blue would suit the story more because of the topic or even the colour of twilight. But yeah dark blue so much better. :D
aaaaaaw what a romantic poem, maybe you should read this outloud to her on ur aniversary day or something. Its a very nice poem and captures the love u have for your family well done I enjoyed reading it a cheerful romatic poem. 15 years is a good stable marriage goodluck for the future. :D
Creative but like eew thats not very sexc way to turn into a vamp lolz, well I like the story I was at the edge of my seate first i guessed that they were going to milk the character cause of the barn and cow stall then I thought rape in a sadistic way because of the audiance. But yeah its was a disgusting creative way to becoming a vamp or what ever.
I really enjoyed reading your poem because I like poetry that is a rhyming story, It was meaningful and had depth. I liked the journey I took as I read it my mind went to a good place of my own imagination it was nice well done, i look foward to reading more. and I hope that you can read some of my work. Mines not that good yet though I still have lots of work to do. :D
I really loved reading this little poem because I can relate to it in so many ways. Some people just dont get how powerful poetry can be and how it affects us especially me in positive ways. Lately I have grown to appreciate poetry more and more. There are some really good ones on writing.com
Wow a talking choclate drink bottle that sounds interesting I guess I mean, under the circumstances of writing a quick story to enter a competition it pretty good I thought it was funny though that the fairy god mother was a choclate drink seriously i thought they just appeared in pretty fairy cloths but you've given it a different look. nice story.
That was a very good attempt I think to say something very nice about your new friend. It was nice poetry and it rymed so it was smooth to read out. I've also written some poems, Its my poems that need some fixing actually I hope that you will find time to read them and tell me what u think. :D
I liked your short story, was it about depression the colours around the character or was it you seemed very depressing. lolz I prefer pink my self. :D Because its a cute colour but thats because Im a girl I like other colours as well. Colours make me happy.
WOW! Awsome story I really enjoyed reading it but it was also scary was the girl a regular girl from earth at a wedding then she goes to space through a door. like it is very creative this is the types of stories I like to read very cool I will look at what else you've written Im sure its very entertaining.
This would be a very nice rock song verse. I like it very much it has impact. Cool poetry skills I have only just gotten into poetry So I try to read as much as poems as I can to understand how to write really good moving ones yours is a great example for me. :D
I love poetry at this romantic extent, I cant wait to have someone in my life that will someday feel the same way about me. Your poem is very nice and it gives me hope. :D Keep on sharing the love my friend.
it is interesting how music inspires us to be even more creative and spontainiously to. Im trying to learn how to play the violin but I havent picked it up in a long while I got dismotivated if that even a word. Well I liked your poem but politics within any state or country Im not very interested its a bore.
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