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Review of The One I Loathe  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I love where the story is going so far, but this chapter has a lot of mistakes. Nothing too bad just missing the second o in too and the r from your. and when trent almost kisses sophie the whole word hand is missing.

but i love it!
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Review of The One I Loathe  Open in new Window.
for entry "Chapter 1" Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
It is a great beginning chapter. I loved the background and seeing both of their lives. There is one spelling mistake in the 7th paragraph, last sentence. It should be "chose" instead of choose" Lookin good so far though! Cant wait to read more!
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