I think you really told me a lot about eyes that I have never thought about before. All of those things you said are very true, and it is amazing how much eyes can do. I hope your friend is okay now (although I assume it has been a long time). Thanks for the read!
I like all of the descriptions you have in this poem, but it moved way too fast for me. It read like one big run on sentence in my opinion. This is one of those things where you need to slow down and capture the emotion a little better. Good start, thanks for the read!
Exactly what sort of problems are you having with the site? If you could specify, I would definitely be willing to help you. Don't get discouraged, though; I had no idea what to do when I first joined the site. Just keep at it, and I'm sure everything will be alright!
This poem painted a good picture in my mind. I can imagine them lying in bed together on the morning of Valentine's Day, and the way you describe the husband really tells me that you love him. The emotion is very strong in the piece. Thanks for the read!
I think this is a great blog of yours. The things you have to say are very interesting and inteligent, and they really spark my interest. It's good that you have a b log where you can just write down random thoughts for people to read.
I read your post on GPs and reviewing, and I think it is very generous of you to give back to the WDC community. You are a very kind person, and I will definitely review your work.
The emotion in this poem is very clear, and it is very evident how much you love your husband. It wasn't generic, like how some love poems are, it was very deep to me. I like how you compare your love to dancing on the moon, that is quite creative in my opinion. Thanks for the read!
I think this is a nice little Valentine's story. You did a great job of writing this, I definitely could not make a story about eating chocolate last this long! Each chocolate was described in great detail, and I could almost taste it myself. Thanks for the special Valentine's story!
I think it is very nice that you wrote to all your fellow writers, as well give them advice. It's really great that you are giving back to the writing.com community. The tips you gave are ones I will keep note of throughout my writing career, and I'm sure many others will. Thanks for helping out by writing this column!
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