I like how short it is, and how much it says about the world. It just shows that things don't have to be long and flowery to get the point across. Although, I had to read through it three times before it kind of made sense.
Very well done, though.
:)
I like the way the words contrast between happy and sad, and the way it tells a story without having to actually be a story. I also like the way the words make the diamond, and it's cool how you put an explanation of that under the poem.
Very well done!
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