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#2931394

Review of Chapter 1 - Scent *Updated*

Review by sleepy

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Very cool, it seems like this is an alternate life you are living! I like the writing style as well, it's kinda like mine the first person. I like the names as well which is a weak point for me, I have a problem coming up with names that are believable. I research all of them and come up with the damnedest things. But, anyway godd luck on this and I hope to read more...keep me posted please!
Thanks,
Sean

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#2930253

Review of Different Breeds Of Werewolves

Review by sleepy

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

I can just say WOW! This is really good! As I read I wondered if you were going to get to the idea of the European Werewolf, and you did. I love the idea of this as a research paper, and the use of the Woodall name as a researcher. I can't remember just yet, but isn't that the name of the lady that lived with the apes in that famous documentary? The Asian werewolf part was really cool too. I thought of how Asians were -from what I had read about- during the Viet Nam war, they were sleak in their ability to hunt our soldiers. What a great imagination for all parts. I also liked that you went back to pre-history Gondwanaland to start your story. I feel that many people, like myself, that hold an interest in the legends werewolves, will really enjoy this work. Sometimes when I read something in this much detail, I often wonder if the person writing this is really a published pro testing the waters for a hit novel. Good luck with your writing!
Thanks,
Sean

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#2925003

Review of Chello

Review by sleepy

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Very cool! I'm a guitarist and went through much of the same that you did. This is good and I did learn something! Good luck in chello and your writing!
Thanks,
Sean

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#2924696

Review of The Path - Progress Journal

Review by sleepy

Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)

"The Gayest" LOL yes you can have that one. I promise I won't use it! I Promise! Good luck with you writing.
Thanks,
Sean

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#2924680

Review of Fighting Fate (Terrible working title)

Review by sleepy

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Ok, I'm hooked into knowing what this person did in his life. Even if you don't decide to finish it, at least let me know that much. I think you should finish it. I also like the wording you used in the line about "the taste of moistened earth in his mouth." Really good wording. Good luck with you writing!
Thanks,
Sean

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#2920484

Review of Imagine

Review by sleepy

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I have a line from this that I like a lot, "like a plague, we molest what is perfect in imagination whilst we transform it to decrepit reality." That is just too true! Great job on this. As I have said before, I am not a poet, and I don't pretend that I can write poetry. This is a great example of extreme thought. It's like asking the question, " If the universe is expanding constantly, what is it expanding in to?"