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Review of Love Lost  Open in new Window.
Review by SnehalG Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I think a Poem of Mine ( Written some back) can answer this sincere aching of Your Heart.

To your Aching Heart

Is there any use to know
Why I say to you “NO”

As we have decided
To be friends and not foe
When no other way to go,
But you need not feel exactly so

Our paths are with different flow
Slow to glow, By Nature’s harsh blow.

So if I to you say ‘No’
You don’t mind
Or think me unkind,
As together we cannot bind

Do not think I am Benign or Divine
As a woman I am devoid of such fine
Qualities which are not mine,
Having only wish those I should find.

All that glitters is not gold
So if you find me bitter
Do not say that
You are not told...

Snehal G
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Review of Twin poem  Open in new Window.
Review by SnehalG Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Yes, It’s a good fantasy about a perfect family. All parents have wishes to bring their children ideally and making them in some superheros. I like the idea of calling them sun and moon who will shine on their own like stars. Well versed except the lines “Chiharu and I have a boy / Kagome and I have a girl”. The word `and’ instead of a simple comma, here conveys different meaning though.
Otherwise, I find it a nice poem about family life and relations.
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Review of Floral Pearl  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
I don't know if this could be a review in true sense, but the verse made me compose few lines with same meaning in my language.
रानात उमले फूल एक सफेद
शोभते जसा मोती हारात,
सौंदर्य कळ्यांचे ते पाहूनी
हरखे एक फुलपाखरू मनी...
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