Mothers are very special people. They give birth to us and care for us. Somehow, after we grow up, most of us tend to forget our mothers. We tend to forget how they stayed up nights for us, how they cared for us and bore our tantrums. Your poem is a tribute to mothers and at the same time, it makes us realize exactly how special mothers are. Thank you a lot for sharing this wonderful poem about mothers
Write On!
SNM
Before I start, I would like to tell you that this review is entirely my personal opinion. If at any point, I cause you any distress, I beg to be pardoned. I hope to be honest and encouraging.
The Title
Very appropriately titled
Spelling, Grammar, Technical
No errors found so that's good news.
What I liked
The storyline. Strong, Descriptive and leaves the reader thinking.
Overall Impression
A well written story. Stays with the reader long after finishing it. Great work. Keep it up
It's an AWESOME story. I really really enjoyed it a lot. I'm going to keep on wondering what 'The SHE-MAN' did to Rodger. It is a very well written story. It's smart and funny and a really good read. It is free from both spelling and grammatical errors and hence I can definitely call it a perfect piece.
Once again
GREAT WORK
SNM
Before I start, I would like to tell you that this review is entirely my personal opinion. If at any point, I cause you any distress, I beg to be pardoned. I hope to be honest and encouraging.
The Title
An intriguing title
What I liked
The way the poem develops. One can almost visualize it.
Kudos for
The choice of words
The strong emotions
The mystery
Overall Impression
A very very well written poem. Keep up the good work and spread the holiday cheer.
Before I start, I would like to tell you that this review is entirely my personal opinion. If at any point, I cause you any distress, I beg to be pardoned. I hope to be honest and encouraging.
The Title
A very appropriate title for you poem
What I liked
The choice of words
The strong emotions
Overall impression
A very good piece of poetry. Patriotic and very much capable of striking an emotional chord in the reader's heart
Before I start, I would like to tell you that this review is entirely my personal opinion. If at any point, I cause you any distress, I beg to be pardoned. I hope to be honest and encouraging.
The Title
It is very straight to the point and interesting at the same time.
Spellings, Grammar, Technical
None found. That's good news
Kudos for
The story itself. It is short but funny.
Overall impression
It is a great story and size has no effect on it. I personally loved it.
The path I followed was the sweet romantic one since I love romance. Very well written. Never knew that old fairytale could turn out to be so interesting. Kudos to you for thinking of this. It gives people to relive their childhood and rewrite a story which most of us have read growing up.
Keep up the good work
Regards
SNM
Husbands are strange. When they are home, we often fight with them but when they leave for work or simply have to go out somewhere, we start missing them and look forward for their return.
Your poem is about them and that feeling. It is a sweet poem. Appears to be a blank verse. Good choice and use of words.
Keep writing
Regards
SNM
Once again, a short but a good piece of poetry. One tiny mistake; it should be nation's instead of nations. It alters the meaning. Please us punctuation as it is a very important part of writing. All said and done, overall a good piece. Keep writing and next time, please write a longer piece if possible.
Regards and Wishes
SNM
A short but a good piece. Please try using caps, as it helps to give the piece a better look and feel. In a way, it gives a clear message about what you want to say and again in some ways, it tries to downplay the actual horror, the actual fear. Well written and definitely one of my favourites.
Regards
SNM
Ah my dear friend, here I am reviewing another work of yours. I hope that I can do justice to your piece.
Wow! And I am not saying that because you are my friend. It is a very good piece. It has a smooth flow and once again is very emotional. There are so many people who for the sake of their loved ones put on a happy face and go through life. But when they are alone, they can't hide themselves anymore. How can one hide from oneself? Your poem speaks about that.
Again, I would like to say that it is a great piece of work. It shows how much you have gone through. Keep on writing my dear friend.
Regards
SNM
People often look for big things for staying happy. They think only big things are good. To hell with people who think that. Here, I am witness to a piece which is short; of four lines only but it is no doubt a poem that strikes an emotional chord in my heart. The length has nothing to do with the quality of the piece. In my opinion, it is a perfect piece. It might be a blank verse sort of but due to what is being spoken, I can ignore the lack of punctuation and capitalization.
Keep up the good work.
Write On!
SNM
That is a very interesting piece. Short, to the point and very clear. It has got a smooth flow and it rhymes! Good work. In short, it a great piece. If something so short is so good, I wonder how it would be, were it longer.
Good work
Keep writing
SNM
Hello Kaity
Let me start by saying that this is entirely my personal opinion so please forgive me if I cause you any distress.
I think I mentioned previously that you should use punctuations for better reading. Please do so.
Your poem is from the point of view of someone who has been hurt and wants to slit wrists to overcome it. It is very clear in stating what it wants its readers to feel.
Overall, I would suggest you to go through it again and work on your poem a little more.
Regards
SNM
hey kyle, really nice poem. we happen to share titles of our work; yours a poem and mine a short story. i really liked your poem. the flow was smooth but if possible, do add the punctuation marks so the reader can read it with proper expressions and also try dividing it into stanzas; like a friend of mine said, allow your work to breathe. nevertheless the poem is very good. try making these minor changes and the reading experience can become exquisite.
Regards
SNM
Hey jordon
I really liked the story but there were a few typos.
For example
desperaqtely - instead of desperately
miserable wretch - maybe wreck is better suited.
The story is nice and so are the character descriptions but if possible please read through it once and correct all the typos so your story becomes even better
Regards
SNM
I really liked this poem a lot. there are 19 lines. just revise the 17th line once. Maybe 'or if my love was true' would sound a bit better. i especially liked the fourth stanza.
Regards
SNM
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