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I love to read just about anything I get my hands on. I will give you my honest opinion, and I will try and help you with errors. If it is a good read I will tell you all about it.
I'm good at...
I'm good at children's story's. and short stories. and poetry, music, medical, holiday, friendship.
Favorite Genres
animal, children, family, inspirational, drama, nature, poetry, music, friendship.
Least Favorite Genres
mystery, science fiction
Favorite Item Types
poetry, short stories.
Least Favorite Item Types
no novel's I don't have time to read them.. I love them just don't have time.
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Review by Rebecca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
This is a great poem. Just keep on loving her.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
This is good, hard to read without the proper punctuation
Friends are the best.
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Review by Rebecca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: The Title is what caught my attention.

Overall Impression: This was a good little read.



My Favorite part: When your telling us what you enjoy about your friends.



My final thoughts: Capitalizing is key. Other than that I believe in the power for friendship.
Keep writing.












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Review by Rebecca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
This is amazing, this made me think of my dad. thank you for writing.
and keep on writing.
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Review by Rebecca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
This is a true statement,

Anyhting is possible as long as you believe you can achieve it, work hard, and stay focused.
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Review by Rebecca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
This is a good read, I tell m students all the time to think before they speak, Once words are spoken they cannot be taken back. so becareful.
Thank you for writing.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hooks: the title is what caught my attention



Overall Impression
this is good. you did a good job writing this.


My Favorite part:
Time to turn the page and start a new chapter,


My final thoughts: this is very thoughtful, it is always good to branch out and seek better for yourself. and to hope the best for everyone.












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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: the title us what caught my attention



Overall Impression this is amazing.



My Favorite part:Even through all my mess
You never fail to show me I’m blessed.
You continue to keep me
Through it all.

I love you Lord 💖



My final thoughts: This is an amazing write. it sounds like a song that we sang in church, you did such a great job on this, I am going to submit this to good deeds,
keep up the great work.












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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
my comforting scripture is James:4:8 Draw near to God and He will draw near to yu, cleanse your hands,you sinners and purify yur hearts, you double minded.

the song: Jesus name, by Darlene Zschech says it all for this song,
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Review by Rebecca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

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Hooks: The title is what caught my attention.


Overall Impression: this was a good poem.



My Favorite part: Music.
It lifts a bad day, and spins it around.



My final thoughts: this was well written, and I agree music is the key. I listen to music all day long, lifts my spirit. puts a smile on my face. you did a good job with this one. keep up the good work.












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Review of Cleanse  Open in new Window.
Review by Rebecca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

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Hooks: the title is what caught my attention



Overall Impression: this was a good short read.



My Favorite part: I really didn't have a favorite part, I like the whole poem.



My final thoughts: this was well written. love sitting outside listening to nature. keep up the good work.












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Review of Panic  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

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Hooks: the title is what caught my attention.



Overall Impression: This is a good poem, with a little clean up it would be great.



My Favorite part: The whole this is great I don't have a favorite part.



My final thoughts: Very well written, very imformative, I know several people who suffer with panic attacks. they are not to be taken lightly. keep up the good work.












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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hooks: the title is what caught my attention



Overall Impression: this is good. very accurate.


My Favorite part:No more minutes left in class
No more time for it to last
Rushing, racing through the halls



My final thoughts: This made me smile when I read it. I remember doing this when I was in school. and now I do this when I am at work. very good keep up the good work.












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Review of Anxiety  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hooks: The title is what caught my attention.


Overall Impression: this was well written.



My Favorite part:Walking in circles with limbs unstable and smiling to cheerful faces, a smile kindled by the desperate need to seem sound and joyful.



My final thoughts: This is such a true poem. I know several people who suffer from anxiety. they appear to be all together, and inside they are shaking, scared, and having so much trouble just getting threw the day. you did a great job with this poem. very good. keep up the good work.












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Review of A new dawn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hooks: The title is what caught my attention.



Overall Impression: this is a good poem.



My Favorite part:A time for change.
A chance to make it,
To rectify the past mistakes and heal the scars of a time passed



My final thoughts: This is a good poem, very well written. everyone gets a chance to change things with the new year. keep up the good work.












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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hooks: the title is what caught my attention.



Overall Impression: this is very good. I am going to submit it to good deeds.



My Favorite part: Wherever you are, He'll meet you right there.
If your heart is tattered, He'll mend the tear.



My final thoughts: you did a great job on this writing. I really enjoyed reading this.












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Review of Gratuity  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hooks: the title is what caught my attention.



Overall Impression this is so true.


Cause she has just served
The one who took her for granted

For she had to do
What she was told to
To make sure you got what you wanted
My Favorite part:



My final thoughts: this is so true, a waitress's job is very hard and sometimes not so rewarding. you always have to be friendly, smile, and polite. and a lot of times get a lousy tip. I give them a lot of credit. I couldn't do there job.












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Review by Rebecca Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hooks: the title is what caught my attention.



Overall Impression: this is good. funny,



My Favorite part:Unless he sings in Morse
Code - of course



My final thoughts: this is a funny little poem, glad I read it today I needed a smile. good job.












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Review of Wakeup!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hooks: The title is what caught my attention.



Overall Impression: This is a good read.



My Favorite part:Wakeup! Smell the roses she's been gone for along time.



My final thoughts: This is a good read, and so true with so many people. if someone treated me that way. I would have no problem leaving and staying gone, its the ones who treat you right are the hardest to get over. keep up the good work.












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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: the title is what caught my attention.



Overall Impression: This was very well written.



My Favorite part: God is not primarily concerned with your health.
• God is not primarily concerned with your marriage.
• God is not primarily concerned with whether your children are on drugs.
• God is not primarily concerned with whether you have a job.
• God is not primarily concerned with how much property you have.
• God is not primarily concerned with your loved one's death.
• God is not primarily concerned with the state of affairs of the world.
• God is not primarily concerned with many more of these things.




My final thoughts: This was a great read. very imformataive, I can't wait to read some of your other writings. keep up the good work,












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Review of Web of fears  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hooks: the title is what caught my attention.



Overall Impression: this is well written



My Favorite part:Is your no good for my soul
And I need to let you go




My final thoughts: you did a good job on this writing. keep up the good work.












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Review of Christmas  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hooks: The title is what caught my attention.



Overall Impression: This is so right on about Christmas.



My Favorite part: Our saviors birthday



My final thoughts: This is a well written poem, you did a great job on this.

Christmas is my favorite time of the year. keep writing.












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Review of Remember this day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The Title is what caught my attention: This is such a touching read, and so very true. you did a great job with this.
breaks my heart just knowing the people that sacrificed there lives.

Only two defining forces have ever offered to die for you: Jesus Christ and The American Soldier. One died for your soul, the other for your freedom.


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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
The title caught my attention: This is amazing, you did a great job on this. there is no words that i can say.
I believe there is a star still there, its so amazing that all God had to do is breath and it appeared, He is the Almighty Powerful One. I would love to read more of your writings. I am going to submit this to Good Deeds.


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Rated: E | (3.5)
The title caught my attention: Grace is a gift, Yes it is. This is really good you did a great job on thisi would
love to read more of your writings. Keep up the good work.
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