'Lisa flew up the stairs, but it was obvious Anne was already dead, a broken neck. She called security who called 911. Sitting down, her heart pounding, she waited for the police to arrive. Suddenly, however, she realized how quiet it was, and feeling genuinely terrible about it, Lisa smiled.'
Was she relieved that someone (Anne) died?
'Something that lets me get lost in a world of just my empty thoughts and just the paper and pen know what I write.'
'I feel like the more I write the more I get closer to finding what I I'm looking for. That being a "question" to an "answer"'
True. I'm sure anyone can relate to that.
'None knows of it but me'
It's true. I like that line so much. I guess we both agree that no one knows the pain, how bad you are going through, but us ourselves.
No one really realizes that until something happens after, then it's too late.
we ourselves just have to fight through the pain, that we are going through
I feel so sad reading this poem. I certainly do not want to be in that person's shoes, but I'm definitely sure that I'd feel the same way if I get hurt the same.
I guess we only then realize our mistakes and wrong doings when something bad happens after, and then it's too late.
This poem is very beautiful, and yet very emotional. I want to get to know this person so much, and I want so badly to make him/her happy, and comfort him/her every time she/he is sad.
This poem really struck me, but it also inspired me to help and comfort other people feeling the same way.
okay... so we have to explore the meaning of this?
Though for me, I somehow think that this also symbolizes us, people. Well, not all people of course, but some.
BROKEN has a lot of different meanings, and I somehow feel a bit uneasy saying it.
But I don't get the last lines, though. But I thinks it means that being broken gives us the opportunity to be a better person,somehow.
I keep repeating the last line in my mouth. I think there's more meaning to it than just by reading it.
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