Very deep in portrayal description,great choice of words chosen to express this piece, i loved the whole read thorough.Great meaning in te structure piece. I would put comma's and use some proper writing in the short stanzas. Would be useful.
Great piece-keep writing
very inviting warmth and laughter of good times of this piece is how it projected to me and it took me to a similar place with comfort and peace. Good flowing poem as well as its words potrayed the memory. Nicely done
Sanctified Soldier here, new writer here and i would love to join the WDC Angel Army to promote great extensions of kindness and pledging my dedication to be an awesome angel in the army here at WDC..
Thankyou
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