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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My overall impression is that this is a very concise and condensed story yet you never lost the meaning or shorted the story in any way. I find writing short pieces stressful so this really impressed me!

To be perfectly honest there is really nothing that I can see to change. Anything that struck me, so to speak, was more asthetic then structural so not really relevant.

All in all I really enjoyed this story and am impressed with the way you can describe/explain something so clearly without ever alluding to it at all.
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