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Rated: E | (4.0)
Some pieces get mixed up with humans and pokemon, but this one sets it's rules and then let's you run wild! With different regions and a whole host of pokemon, it's very easy to either start a new branch or keep a storyline going! Loads of chapters too!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A comprehensive piece that sets its structure well. It branches out with each age bracket, and there's promising content in each of them! The author has set up a good premise, and appears to be actively involved with contributing and monitoring the writing!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A quirky little piece that appears to be for a competition entry! It leaves some intrigue and I do wonder where it is going. Spacing might have been useful but at the same time it also gives the feel that it is hastily written diary extract so that works too!
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Good selection of girls to fatten up and an easy setting to work with. Often you end up with just a selection of decisions and the interactive just ends before anything even happens. It has been dormant for a while but I'm hoping that it picks up again soon!
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It's a commonly done concept but this is one that doesn't try to shoehorn in a particular direction or goal. It could, ironically, do with filling up but given some additional time I could really see this taking off! It has a focus but you could really go anywhere!
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