This is a good contest for
Writers. As usual love and
Romantic stories will be liked
By all. If we can show it in different
Angel, surely it will get success. Thank you
For giving this opportunity. But I can't
Submit it, because I am not a paid member.
This contest is some what looking peculiar. Even though I write about different stories with different characters, i found difficult to write about my character. Now a days I am happy. But when I am at teenage My character seemed completely changed. Actually I failed to understand it. The anger in me, and upsets in my Life, and insults i faced, made me so much depressed. I have no hopes that which I presented to the contest will be selected. any way thank you for accepting my work. Your contests make us to participate very interestingly.
The bad deeds we did makes the way to the hell. But according to me the good deeds we do makes our life happy. And this will lead us to good ending with peaceful memories. According to your poetry, I too experienced that dark nights, till i found the brightness in my life.
One suggestion to you from my side. It is better you change the font style to get quick reading and better understanding. Hope you understand.
Excellent job. It is a nice and funny story. Brandon's experiment was fine and funny. What a thought he made. But, unfortunately he placed his brother for testing his experiment, and he became the sweet food of Tommy's hunger.
I enjoyed reading it. Ok, best of luck for your future achievements.
You are correct Shalini. Actually from the earlier days, we woman are undergoing with such a circumstances that, we our selves used to tell that woman should understand, she should be calm going, should not involved in other matters except home and children. Not only these, but also undergoing many harasments. Actually men know that if woman started a fight they will get completely ruined. At first our thoughts should be changed and withstand unitedly.
You told the truth of life. At some times even me thought of living alone. But now a days, that too after marriage, I cried for my parents and realized their value in my life. And when my sister left America with her husband, I cried for her, for missing a good friend.
It is nice and i liked it very much.
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