Ash's (sssvsports) Reviews

Its its quite good. for me it needs to be sung differently or the background music needs to be different. I can't really tell witch.the ending need some work to. But all and all qutie good.

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#3437255

Review of My Garden Of Peace sung by Gerry Coates

Review by Ash

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

I love the beat this is the Fifth time i listened to and i stil love it. The gatair rocks. Who ever singing is pretty good and over all i liked the song. Wait scratch that the sixth time i liistened to it. You just need to do something to the singing he dosen't very much when he sings. i think it works well for this song but you might want to watch that if you do any more songs.

7

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#3437252

Review of The Stranger

Review by Ash

Rated: E

| (4.5)

That was cool i mean not the part about him trying to hurt the guy but the rest was cool. Not very much help i know. I had to read it a couple times before it really sunk in if that helps any.

8

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#3436566

Review of Stupid Things

Review by Ash

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

That was amazing. It really is true though if you think about it.

9

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#3436369

Review of The World of Darkness

Review by Ash

Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

It was really good. Ilight say that to everyones storys or what ever i read but i could see or well feel what you meam in your wordsbut umm When i go there i just lie down on the floor or on my bed an slip away. isn't that an suppost to be an and.

10

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#3436271

Review of Nathan the Ninja Warrior

Review by Ash

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

That was amazing. I really liked it. It was suppenseful but not boringknid of suspence.