great job on your poem. your idea of love is very fairytale like, and i mean that in a good way. i couldnt help but to smile while reading it and picturing myself with a love that rare. wonderful job
This poem touched me on a personal level. Too many times I've wanted to stand on top of the world and scream to stop. I get so fed up with all the bad that's everywhere to the point where you have to scream. but anyways i thought you did really well on this poem
I had to read this a few times to really take it in. Correct me if I'm wrong, but are you saying that you are like a "robot" so to speak with the battery part. numb without him./her? this is what i got from your poem. and great job
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