Wow! Very supenseful and well worth the read. Though this is a short story there is so much suspense and action packed into it. Awesome job! How did you come up with a story like this?
I like how you wrote this poem. It is understandable even with the broad vocabulary and the way you laid out your poem. It makes me curious, wondering about the idea you were referring to. But i get the feeling you are afraid to show who you are or what you believe in. Maybe you have a dream others would not support you for, I really don't know, but this is how I interpreted it. The last line in the ending was surprising. It caught me off guard. It flows so gracefully(I realized this when i reed it for a second time,but this time out loud). If i were to guess, i'd guess you aren't new to this poem writing. Am I right?
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