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Review of Shibuya.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Good little flash fiction. Felt relatable with the part about the boy putting on the headphones to be away from his surroundings. I also like the small reveal at the end.

Good job! :)
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Review of A Poem  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I really like the use of the vocabulary. Could have used more punctuation, but I like that the poem drew me away from it with how well written it was.
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Review of Carrot cupcakes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Found it very humorous and I liked that it kept the subject going with the last word from every line.
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Review of if only  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (1.5)
This feels more like a random facebook or twitter post or maybe a line from a nursery rhyme. I understand what you're trying to get across, and I can relate, but it doesn't really give me anything to go off of or get into.
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Review of SH ANE  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I like that this poem takes the subject very seriously and doesn't go away from that.

However, I do not like the line "be put to rest beside her coz i wil smile for eternity." The spelling and dialect is radically different from the rest of the poem. I'm sure "wil" was a typo but "coz" doesn't really fit in. "Cause" or "because" would have been better fitting. I also don't the random lower cased I's when they're supposed to always be capitalized by themselves.
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Review of A Nature Poem  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the lines about the wind and trees, putting soft imagery in the readers' heads.

Wish there would have been more seperation in stanzas. The punctuation is very bad.
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Review of Freedom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The whole "girl in abusive relationship" is so typical in poetry. Nothing really makes this poem stand out any except for the first stanza, which does offer something newer and isn't boring or cliche.
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