Hey Chandler,
I really liked the name of this poem, it was what originally got my attention. You then immediately catch the reader by making them want to know exactly what this feeling you alluded to was, and went on to capture it in the next few stanzas. Your description was very powerful and I feel like you got to that feeling of despair and longing that few are able to describe. Thank you for sharing!!
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