Dear Rose,
Your story was a great read for me. The enthusiasm in the the boy's pulse was vibrant... I could almost visualise Anthony running for a cause, which only his little sister Aria knew ! It struck a chord in my memory, about a HINDI Movie ( an Indian language ), about a boy who ran to win a race to save his brother & his middle class school from the humiliation of losing to the ultra modern schools of his town. In the end he succeeded with a lot of applause.
Thanks for a very beautiful piece of writing. Anthony must have had a very valid reason why he ran the race to win it.
With best wishes,
Mou. Dutta.
Dear Srlcuckoo,
What a beautiful way to pretend our life as movie, where you can rewind the good old days, without knowing the end, where happiness could disappear.True,when we think of some beautiful moments of the past, it brings a smile to our lips. Just like a cinema we can rewind the golden days and bask in its beauty.
Thanks,
Mou Dutta.
Hi,
The story is just awesome...I had goosepimples a s I read through the piece...The pace , matter, content everything was so well matched...Re-incarnation is a subject which has puzzled even Philosophers...but the greatest delight of such a re-birth tales comes from unfulfilled love in the past birth....this has been rightly depicted in your story..
Great writing,
Keep it up,
Mou Dutta.
WONDERFUL......
THE TITLE---- VERY APT & CLEAR
THE BODY----- BEAUTIFUL & RYTHMIC
THE LINES----I COULD ALMOST VISUALIZE "THE DAZZLE AND THE GLEAM"
LOVELY EXPRESSIONS !!
EMOTIONS---THE "SUDDEN STORM" WHICH DEPICTS THE EMOTIONS, WHICH WASHES AWAY ONES SOUL, MAKES A
PERSON STRONGER AND FILLS THE HEART WITH LOVE, JOY & PEACE.
VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
CONGRATULATIONS
KEEP WRITING.
Actually you have so wonderfully described that every man is an island by himself..we do separate each other from the torments and despair around us... The vast sea of struggle around us only make us more detached from our fellow human beings..as we sometimes see our dreams as waves crashing down on the shores of an island......
Wonderful thoughts..
keep it up.
Mou Dutta
The poem is very touching; we do wonder how we can make it when we lose a near & dear one,and though "TIME" is a sweet memory, it is the best healer.
Mou Dutta.
Good description about beauty...i think "BEAUTY LIES IN THE EYES OF THE BEHOLDER "....this was a small quotation which was told to me when i once wrote a poem about "BEAUTY", some 26 years ago !!! I think the nature around us is much beautiful as you have aptly described.
Mou Dutta.
very apt thoughts for the present age..it is because of the problems we face that we are still alive,because in diversity we preserve the human race !!!!!
Mou Dutta.
Your feelings are very true ..."good times never last, only memories remain,"......but don't you think that is why we have sweet memories....to make us feel good to make us remember the joys we shared with someone. Again as you have mentioned comes a CHANGE, when you will see that you are sharing a good time with yet another loved person...So we have to keep on looking for good times ahead of us and savour the past moments..
Mou Dutta
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