Certainly a captivating subject and perspective. Other than at least one spacing issue I can think of, I say this is a winner. You can tell an intelligent person wrote this.
I agree with you that people of this society put way too much emphasis on materialism and "keeping up with the Joneses." This is very well-written. One can tell that you have quite a bit of intelligence. Keep it up!
I had to giggle because the first thing I did even before opening it was try to look up the word. I love learning new words. I've also always liked coming up with stories my whole life. That's probably why I became a novelist.
This is very well-written and educational! Well done!
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