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Review of The Salesman  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hey are you published?!? I have never given so many perfect ratings in my life. You are a true master craft, and I'm gona say this even I cound't apporach your level.

Here are the postives and negatives.
+ Good plot, dialouge, and surprises.
+ Good twist ending
+ No spelling or grammar errors.

- ?!? nothing

Keep on writing!!! You are a true master!!!!
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Review of Death Chamber  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Oh my god, you are one of the best writers here on Writing!!!!!!!!!!! This, with out a doubt the greatest thing I have ever read.

Everything is perfect in this story. You get a 5.0 my man, and you deserve it.

Now for the postives and negatives...

On the postive side
+ Perfect story, dialouge, and charcter develpoment.
+ Nice twist ending
+ No grammar errors!!

On the negative side...
Uh.........
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh, dark and sinster... I loved the ending. You set the story up nicely and ended it well. This story was peppered with great dialouge and had no grammacal errors.

What ever you do, don't write a sequal!!! I want to leave what happens up to my imagantion!!

Now, on the postives and negatives

On the postive side,
+ Good twist ending!!
+ Good dialouge, good writing style
+ No spelling or grammar errors.

On the negative side,
- Mighta been a little longer.

Keep on writing!!

Aaron
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Review of Seoul Mates  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good job over all!!! I loved this story!! The charcters are well thought out, and while you don't go compeltly in depth into their personalites, you do make me intersted.

The postives and negatives are listed below.

On the postive side...
+ Good well written story. You show what the charcters are doing.
+ Good well-thought out story.
+ No spelling or grammar errors

On the negative side...
-Not all the paragraps are indented
-Blocky paragraps.
- Where's the second part??!!!!!

Aaron
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Review of Last one Standing  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Oh, yeah this peice is really postive and uplifitng. Makes me wanna go jump off a bridge*Smile*. Just kidding though. I really liked this peice though it did seem dark. Techancally, I found no spelling or grammar errors in this peice.

My postives and negatives are listed below.

On the postive side,
+ Very well written, draws you in
+ Good use of visuals
+ No spelling or grammar errors.

On the negative side....
- Not very friendly or light hearted.


Hope I helped!!!!!

Aaron

"Graphics aren't everything. Gameplay is the key!"
-Captain Commando (Marvel VS Capcom)
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Review of Way to go, Trey!  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
Good story though I really din't get the plot... Oh, well. The spelling and grammar are good.....

The postives and negatives of this peice...

On the postive side....
+ The spelling and grammar are good

On the negative side....
-I just did not get this story
- Yopu may want to liven up the story, it just din't draw me in

Hope I helped!!

Aaron
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I loved this peice!!!! The title suits it well and I loved the way the charcter was intoduced. The spelling was right on target and the reader felt for the charcter. If you want to contuntune this story, you could do it when she(?) is much older(maybe a teenager)

Now, for the postives and negatives

On the postive side...
+ A breathtaking story with a nice story and good charcters
+ Nice view into autism
+ The spelling is top notch

On the negative side....
- Put spaces between the paragraphs. Its kinda blocky and hard to read.

Hope I helped,
Aaron
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Review of Fairy Nuff chap1  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very very well done!! I liked the story and the spelling is correct and on target. One problem I dod have though is the length, I'm not sure if this is designed for little kids, but it may be too long for anyone 8 and under

Okay, the postives and negatives.

On the postive side....
+ I loved the refernce to the Game Boy*Smile*
+ Very well done story with nice visualizations and charcters I can beleve in.
+ Nice use of earth techonolgy and fairies fasction with it.
+ Spelling is really good.

On the negative side....
- The story may be too long for young children
- Also some of the words may be to advanced for the age group as well.

Hope I helped!!
Aaron


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a well done story!!! The spelling is topnotch and the visualizations make feel like I'm in the story.

Here are the postives and negatives of this story.

On the Postive side....
+ The breathtaking visualizations help me get intersted in this story.
+ The charcters are enjoyable and intersting, I'd love to see other stories with these charcters
+ The spelling is correct

On the negative side....
- The story ends too suddenly, if this is a chapter story then the ending is alright, but if this is a stand-alone story then change the ending
-I wanna read more of this story!!!

Hope I helped,
Aaron
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Review of The Gardener  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good... Although its kinda hard to read because the text is all blocked toghther.

Good job though...

Hyper Sonic
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