Wow, That was a creative one. you have developed a new grammar in poetry. The first appearance even before reading will impress the readers and the words the flow So without saying No to Go is Excellent. but here is another challenge for you, Can you write a poem in the same format but with a completely different theme and words. Try out if it is possible then we have one more form of poetry to add to the list like Sonnet, Haiku etc.,
Wow a nice poem which speaks about a woman relishing independence ( due to ignorance - my opinion). Is this your feeling or imagination. I liked the flow of words in the poem but the thought something on which you have to give a second thought.
"I have too much to lose
by making bad decisions"
Yes you will loose too much if you stick to this bad decision of living alone.
A nice idea and i will do my best to promote the site.
The sample Email is the perfect format for any such mail. How the group will know which member has mailed to promote the site. Do we get any GP for promoting the site. Providing links to our own works in other sites is also one form of promoting the site along with the site.Right
A nice thoughtful poem. Usually i look for a new thought in any poem rather looking for grammar, punstuation, unintentioal rhymes etc.,I that context your thought is refreshing. You have very brought the message that we all are the warriors struggling to survive. The memories are the inherited medals. Isn't it?
The story was very interesting to read but the ending doesn't provide the necessary twist. I got glued to you story to know why the doctor pushes red button and the secret behind the two men. The story is as strange and confusing as the Doctor. But entertaining nonetheless.
As a newbiew i found this article to be very useful and now i have learned the ethics of reviewing any item. To be honest the font colours irritated me but otherwise it is a good one. But you have put all important points of reviews in a very simple and understandable way. Is this is a proper review ? Waiting for your reply.
That was a nice piece of suggestion on what not to do while reviewing a poem. You could have better given the title as "Reviewing Etiquette of a Peom" because as i newbie i eagerly entered this page to know about Review all genre of items but i was disappointed and learned only about Reviewing a Peom. Anyway a useful one and i would not to do such things because i myself is not a good poet.
Wow that was a touching poem about a man still waiting for his beloved. May i know why used the word "wants" instead of "dreams" in "I hope oneday.....". May be because you have used it already in a line before. Anyway it is different to read "Wants will come true" instead of usual "Dreams will come true". May i know who is this Samantha.
Wow, you have very well brought the real fact about time and this is like a pinch on my hand to come out of the illusion and know the reality. Reality is timeless. The words following "Take a dew drop of time" and i just did what you said and wow it was amazing how fast our mind travels back and forth. But here is the contradiction, physically time is constant and mentally it is not. And that explains the difference between mortal physical body and immortal mental soul. We feel 100 years is a long time we live but a butterfly which lives for one day may feel the same. Good job.
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