Wow that was very good. Especially at the end. I hope to read more of your poems. You have a talent writing. This deserves a 4 1/2 sorry i don't gave away five stars but I still loved it . I enjoyed reading it. Anyways have a nice day and please never stop writing.
Very nice like how I could visualized the story. I loved the history in it as well. You did a good job on writing this. I hope to read more from you. I hope you continue to write and never stop because I see talent in you and your writing.have a wonderful night
very nice. i love how you put in what the mermade had said it put a smile on my face. good job with the peo. i enjoyed it. i liked your grammar even though i am not a grammar person i think you did well. anyways keep up the good work and never stop writing.
ok what i got out of this was that we should cheris are life becuse we only get one and once are loved one is gone we cant get them back. if that is what you were saying you did a good job. anyways keep up the good work and keep writing
very nice, this sound like me that is why i write. i love your poem and how you did get your point across and i know how you feel. keep up the good work and never stop writing. becuase i would love to read moe. this decerves a four in half star.
Aj (svufandom)
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