Awesome sauce! I loved this poem! I appreciate the fact oh kept a steady rythem throughout the entire poem, and also liked the specific words you used. A nice read really, it scared me a bit but that's just me and my nerves haha.
I really like this! I pictured everything, almost as if it were of movie because of how well you described everything. Detailed, well-written, profound, deep, intricate, and refreshing were all the factors contributing to this piece.
Awesome! I enjoyed this very much! I like how the main character keeps a log of what's going on around his life;) It's really interesting the way you wrote this. It makes me feel as if the character is real, and this is an actual diary from real-life!
Really interesting poem this is. It makes you think you know? It could also mean a ton of different things to a lot of different people. It's incredibly well-written and I believe you executed it nicely. Nice choice of words too!
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