Very nice. Your word actually drew pictures. I especially enjoyed the visual images in Kiss me as we slip between the sheets of dreams. I can almost see the lovers sliding under the covers. A little tug at the heartstrings is always great in poetry.
Very tongue in cheek. But why artificial feet? The rest was right on,a true poem for infection control/prevention. Or perhaps a handwashing crusaders hymn. I on't know much about poetry and the meter but it works for me. I will look forward to reading more of your works.
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