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Review of Frailty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
Having to scroll down every few words gets annoying, so maybe avoid that in the future. Sometimes you see people use words to form a shape but it doesn't look like your doing it here. Also, it's hard to tell what's a sentence and what's not when everything is capitalized
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Review of Shadowbrook  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
the story instantly drew me right in, and then almost as quickly spat me right back out. the story is interesting but short and its over almost before it began. i feel like it has some potential and if it were to be adapted into a longer story i would be interested in reading that.
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