Well written story. I liked the idea. The starting was great and I loved the flow of the story. Maybe you could work on the middle parts and ending. The way you introduced how the ring worked was kind of straight forward and I felt as if the story ended kind of fast. Overall, I loved your writing and I really hope to read more. Keep up the good work mate. :)
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