is this written seriously. why is kept short and incomplete. even the English used is not of the highest quality. the writer should think about whether to continue writing or think of some other hobby. mothers are unique and they should be honoured with a full homage to their contribution to their children's development.
Its a beautiful poem written in the tradition of a time gone by. it captures the pathos of a bygone era identified by truly brave, valiant and noble men and women who laid down their lives for a great dream which continues to be enjoyed by people today. Keep up the good work my friend.
Nicely written about an everyday phenomenon but hardly noticed in these busy times. it shows that, one day, one will have to take evasive action which will not be our own decision but one which is forced upon us. and this decision will come sooner than later.
We face such negative situations in life everyday with resilience but one day it is bound to break.
Dont start with a word like 'Goddamn'.
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