Loved it ! Loved it ! Loved it ! This is an excellent poem that has been composed by the author. This poem will hit a nerve with many of the readers, as it reflects on the day to day stuggles of the mind, with concerns to time passing by, that many of us face. I am greatly moved by the impact of these words. It is within my desire to see this author excel through this writing experience. :)
Love, my favorite topic in this world, The author gives a refreshing look at a few of the many benefits of loving and being loved. I really enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for posting.
Beautiful! The last passage sets the mood and the foundation for the rest of the poem. I especially like the last part of the poem for its infinite design of love, love everlasting. Great job with this one. This poem carries with it a cherished milestone, because while the love is present with the characters of the poem, there is also conflict and immense hurt and pain.
Although the two lovers know one another on a physical, spiritual, and soul level, it doesn't prevent the one from hurting the other. This poem is so profound, with a hint of masochistic inclinations. I understand this one all too well. Well Done. Keep Writing.
I really like this poem, for its rapturous attractions. I am a twi fan, and this poem definitely gives an accurate depiction of the lover's web that has been spun by these three random victims of cupid's arrow. I especially am enamored with the part that says, .......with love, the answers and decisions aren't always easy.......and ...I quote,"love has a power all its own.." I couldn't agree with the author more. Great poem. Keep Writing.
A truly exceptional poem, with a striking title. I love this poem, as it sends out a very prophetic, alarming message to all of the inhabitants of this earth. This poem should be ranked among the best of the best for its apocalyptic presence and compelling depiction of what is to come. Brilliant. Keep Writing.
This is a very engaging poem that is filled with conflicting personalities, such as: Pride and humility, Vanity and Somberness, arrogance and sorrow. This poem was exemplified remarkably. Brilliant presentation, and formation, a winner of its kind. A poem of which the readers can draw inspiration and soulful contemplation on one's own life. A poem of life lessons, and "just desserts" .
A very interesting topic, and the author's creative use of euphemism gives the poem an colorful and sweet appearance. This poem has character and an educative quality. The author has fancied my curiosity, because I am very interested in knowing, why wasn't Gare there? This poem has a hint of sadness in it, and a bitter sweet loneliness. I enjoyed it. Keep Writing.
A well written poem. The illustration and format provided the cornerstone for this timeless poetry. This poems has vision and substance, and it carries within its bosom the sacred realm of animism and spirituality. I do however, believe that the title is a little too bland for the flavor of the poem. Nevertheless, I enjoyed the body of the poem. Great Job! Keep Writing.
Wow...this article is very, very interesting. It's also comical, as my mind started drifting to other things. The author has presented a very informative piece of work here. This one seems to have a few subliminal messages hidden throughout its context. I enjoyed this one. Keep Writing.
I am particulary fond of this poem, because its originality in style . The author manipulates ordinary words to suit the characters of the poem. The author has proven that creative expression does and can embody the ordinary things of life. It is was creativity is all about. Keep Writing
A very colorful story, with character and design. The author draws a picturesque depiction of the dipper's birth. A remarkable tale interwoven through a stream of connecting words that facilitates the poem's fantastical nature. Keep Writing.
What a beautiful story, that is full of detail and merriment. The author has shown the readers a happy, loving family, and the joys of sharing the holidays with loved ones. There is also a veil of secrecy that is in the story, that will leave the readers with a sense of calculated expectations. Keep Writing.
This is a nice story, with a very happy ending. The story started out with planning for Jane's wedding, and I generally don't care for wedding stories, not in books nor movies. (I don't know why I feel this way) The car accident and the revealed family secret, gave the story its lifeline. Good Writing.
This poem is very tasteful, and has a sense of nobility to it. The title is well suited for it, and it speaks volumes for the poem. The first and the last verses are my personal favorites, as they are the cornerstones of the poem in its entirety. Keep writing.
A very charming poem, with a catching title. This poem takes the readers on a quaint stroll through New Orleans before the days leading to its devastation. Superb layout ! I am very pleased with the hint of nastalgia, that will reach into the hearts of the readers. Keep writing.
The scenery that the author has invoked, creates a feeling of peace, beauty, and life. Each and every verse seem to have a melodious pitch. This is a very awe inspiring poem, once again, "Random Read" turns up another winner. Thanks! Keep Writing.
Absolutely beautiful. This poem captures the essence of uninhibited love, as it transforms itself continuously. This poem is full of life and adventure. The connection with the environment, and the surrounding marine life, shows that the author combines the whole notion of energetic love, with an appreciation for the natural environment of which we all live.
"Swimming with dolphins" I absolutely adore dolphins, so this phrase itself brings even more beauty to the poem. The last two verses are a guaranteed cornerstone for the rest of the poem. There is so much light, joy, mysticism, and freedom present within the interconnected fibers of this lover's ballad.
"In stormy weather wi'll be like falling rain,,," Love it, love it, love it. "Rain" "storms" "love" speaks volumes alone. "A colorful rainbow, free from hurt and pain." Please keep writing, for the words that join together have life. These are all of the elements that I like to see in a love poem.
I give this poem two thumbs up, for its delicate sensuality. Readers will be tantalized by the subtle seductions that are carried out in this skillful poem. The author gives the characters a playful connection, co mingled with long overdo sexual desires. This poem is sensually charming.
A superb poem, that is full of silent meaning and interpretation, and YET, it says alot. I really admire the style of this author, as this poem simmers with the essences of life, and the gravitational pull that our actions bring. The author seems to intuitively be aware of one simple fact: Every small and large thing in life has a purpose.
A wonderful presentation. The author makes a positive connection between relaxation and nature. Thus, this poem should serve as an instruction manual for peaceful living. I believe that the author has done a remarkable job, by reaching out to the readers. The author beckons them through poetic words of purpose, to unite with him/her in this serene and peaceful environment. The author seems to be saying; Park your cars, turn off your computers and televisions, turn off your phones, and go outside and just do what nature calls you to do. I love this poem.
This poem is the staple for life lessons, and karmic debt. It possesses a certain sense of reverence and humility. The author's poem should thus motivate the readers to examine the life patterns in his/her own life, and to discern if piety can be found there. Overall, this poem carries within its bossom, life, reflection, and wisdom.
Absolutely beautiful!!! The author clearly knows a thing or two about the soul that wanders, as this poem so richly details. This poem teachees the readers about spiritual connections, set apart from physical attachments. It will illuminate the carnal minds of the readers, as it suggests, that we see not with the eyes, but with the soul. The clouds could be represented as an elevated state of consciousness. This is a must read for anyone that is soul searching, or simply trying to connect with someone on a more spiritual level.
This is truly a poem of mastery. The author masterfully creates a work of inner reflection, with a bold admittance into the state of "now" and what it means in light of the future. This poem is a mind bender, that has been well thought out, and will keep readers grasping for meaning to this riddle of time. Will the readers grasp the philosophical overtones of this poem? I believe that they will. The author appears to be in touch with the illusion of time.
Therefore, we see, not through our own eyes, but through the eyes of the author. The author's poem illuminates through the idea of time. This is a very beautiful poem.
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