It was a little bit much to read all at once but the concept was good. Maybe having more spacing between your paragraphs would make this easier to stomach.
Spookididly! This poem's rhythm and details were well thought out and interesting. A well-done piece of art. Thank you for this submission and keep writing. You're amazing!
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