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Review by Tainted by life Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great it's such a raw depiction of our world
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this. I know the feeling, and I can fully imagine how great hitting the punching bag must have felt.
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Review by Tainted by life Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is cute, I have also messed around with this writing style in a few of my poems. I find that as long as you don't over do it, this sytle can really serve a great purpose. The poem itself had a lot of great points but I feel that the first two lines of your last verse kind of mess it up a little. Other than that I would have to say it was a great poem.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I know how it feels to be stuck in the box. Great write!!!
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