This is cute, I have also messed around with this writing style in a few of my poems. I find that as long as you don't over do it, this sytle can really serve a great purpose. The poem itself had a lot of great points but I feel that the first two lines of your last verse kind of mess it up a little. Other than that I would have to say it was a great poem.
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