Your poem was heartfelt and moving.
When you can 'feel' something shake loose inside your being, is what it felt like.
The initial loss and then re-creating a new life of your own. There is always a sense of would your loved one approve of the choices you make. Does the widow inwardly seek his advice?
Thoughtful use of words which express grief and the devotion to her true love.
I personally understand the message. Have felt much of what the author appears to have experienced.
Please keep writing.
The Merry Farmer
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