The first line is a beautiful antithesis. "In the stillness of the night, The shadows dance and play". I love the picture you paint here. Very dynamic.
"A haunting melody, leaving its mark."
The above line reminds me of sitting on the porch at midnight and hearing a chorus of crickets, owls, and cicadas all singing in harmony. It really is stunning how nighttime comes alive.
You bring a joyful element to the darkness of the night. Most people are intimidated by the darkness and seldom talk about its beauty.
I have no criticisms about this poem. It's a great poem. It's almost a love letter to the night. I enjoyed traveling to this magical world of melodic darkness.
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