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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Always leave the reader wanting more but stopping this story in 2006 is asking the reader to hold their breath a bit too long. LOL!!!!

What will happen to Mr.Ward? Will I still be able to play the piano? Maybe the answers to those and many other questions will be in the next Chapter.
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very well done! You lay out some background and lure the reader to continue reading. Writers Magic :)
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You painted quite the word picture in seven paragraphs. As an old friend of mine used to say, "Ya dun gud"!

Now that the hook is set, off I go to read the first Chapter :)
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wonderful! You introduced the players and set things up nicely. I wonder why I feel that Admiral McCoy is going to try everything in his power to win that bet ... The epic of yours looks likes it's going to be a lot of fun.


John
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
You covered a lot of ground with this article. Amazing how many of the themes, settings, and plot devices that the online comic Girl Genius has yet is soo much fun to read.
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A good read! Thank you.
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Since your list of random facts is posted under Fiction, I'm guessing that some of "facts" might be true.

Fact 10 Good luck with that one as most people are to self-conscious of themselves to enjoy it.

Fact 27 We share somthing in common - We both like Janet Evanovich :)
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Outstanding read! You made me smile when John found out that he was socially invisible and a larger smile when he found out what that meant. You build the story one layer at a time till you spring the ultimate hacking job on the World. After that the logical extensions of the G-net to the bitter end of the remaining population because of the ultimate computer virus.

I have three words to say to you: Ya Dun Gud!!!
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
If everyone used your method or rating then there would be no need for ratings under 4.0 in the scale.

So a reviewer would have to lie to keep the writers from knowing that there are those out there who do not like what they have just read?

You learn more from bad reviews than from bogus ones.
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for shining a light on an organization that likes to stay in the dark.
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I find it hard to think that someone born now will ever think of these times as "the good old days."
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I bet you didn't know that your virgin maid has a sister - the blank review box ;)
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A sweet tail. I got a smile out of reading your story so ... thank you :)
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
While this story, like a few of your other stories, made me laugh out loud it also had me cringe a bit.

I loved reading it :)
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This story had me laughing so much that my cat moved to another room to get some quiet. I guess that we all know a Jake and have had some similar events happen to us. In fact, I have a great offer for you. I have this land that, after the tide goes out and the alligators leave, would ... Just having some fun with ya :) Fun story!
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
You weave a tale that seems far shorter than it is. I wanted to it to continue because your writing has created a "real" character, Majah, and a World filled with the sights, sounds and smells of a place that I would like to know more of and what happens to Majah now that her Greek lover is gone.
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Any story that can bring a smile to me face is worth writing a review for.

What makes your story more fun is that I know someone that is as "fashionably late" as Hal was but without the wonderful and silly excuses.

Looking forward to reading your other stories.
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Review by Erg123 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Reading this story made me feel like I was watching a movie, a good sci-fi movie that gives hints and makes the audience think.

Very well done! It has been a while since I've had such a good read. Now if I could only keep your story visable in my browser before it vanishes, I would be happy. I now hit the page source and copy your text so I can read it ofline. Not the best way to read but your story is well worth it. Looking forward to reading more.
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