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Rated: E | (3.5)
Very nice imagery! My impression is the third stanza seems out of character compared to the other three verses. Consider replacing soil with dandelion seeds, milkweed seeds, or thistle seeds which might help the third verse fit in better with the rest of the poem. Keep writing!

Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your poem.

Charles Lampert
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