This is very tragic. It's also a bit vague but that's not a bad thing. It leaves me wanting more. In a way I'd say, in some ways, it's like the last page of a very long story. Our characters have already been through so many trials but a part two is a head. So maybe a connecting piece as well.
This was really good and I felt it. The anger and pain. The frustration. It was a sorrowful goodbye. I can't wait to read more. It seemed in a way what you were feeling almost made you scattered when you wrote this. But in some way, I think that added emphasis.
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