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Review of Drought  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
very nice poem. getting back your in your unseen writer groove isn't easy. I myself have been in a black hole with no way out. I have been using books to regain my love for reading and telling stories.


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Review of As Far As I Know  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Cute and funny. it makes you think about things you always say and maybe shouldn't say around the wrong people.


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Review by thomasmcharg Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
sad poem but real. repeating one line is different. poems help hold people close to you. loss is always hard and something that you never forget.


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Review of The last train  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed the story. It's a very interesting idea of a train to heaven. If you changed anything maybe describe the things seen better. The shadows on the train could be fleeting faces of people left behind. Only suggestions honestly this was very well written.


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Review of Far Away Friend  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
never heard of this way of writing but it does flow well and I find it interesting. they say that sometimes friends are more special than family in special ways.
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Review of Heart?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I really enjoyed the poem. It's not a easy life when you wear your heart on your sleeve but it's a great way to live and learn about everything. keep up the great work.


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Review of Work in Progress  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
okay so Idea, how about a female wizard. something different from other stories. Maybe gets surprised by a chance meeting with a female fighter or thief. You could make the whole story surrounding the problems that females would face beside males.
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Review by thomasmcharg Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
very well written and very interesting to read. the story really sticks out and draws the reader in. The gods and the many worlds could be described in another story. follow each god in his or her realm and a full description of each.
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Review by thomasmcharg Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a very cute twist on the Pokémon characters. A foot fetish is different but can be exciting for both parties. This story dives into two totally different worlds and meshes them together nicely. It’s something that I enjoyed reading and would read more stories like this. Erotica is a very vast subject and can be delivered nicely. Good story


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Review of Cavy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It’s nice to remember family pets even the exotic ones. The l
Flow was good and it kept me interested in the subject. Well done
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Interesting way to describe the problems of today with a wider spin on them. It’s been a very long haul and things are slowly getting to normal. I really enjoyed the story and look forward to reading more of your writing.
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Review of Loving Hands  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
well done. It's true that fur babies are a blessing and animals love you no matter what unless you harm them. Many people have proven they don't deserve the unbiased love of a animal and many have loved lots of animals until they cross the rainbow bridge.
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Review of Emily  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
fantastic story. well done. keeps the reader on the edge the whole way. the past always has a hold on the future and remembering those who gave everything so we can be here today is special.
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Review of I Chose  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
the light is different for everyone and everyone has a right to view it however they want. keep up the good work and don't let anyone stop you from doing what you believe. Poems or stories always depend on how much you want to believe in yourself and where the light takes you.
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Review of Waiting  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very well written and said. I enjoyed reading this and felt the emotion within the words
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Review of milky way  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
wow nicely done. it shows what someone would do for love. it's a shame the person didn't notice or care but never give up on finding love.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
very interesting. it flows good but does leave a few questions to be answered. What kind are you talking about and why would reporters be looking or waiting for you ?
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
very cool story. it's funny how sometimes we wish for something but when it happens we freak out
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Rated: E | (3.0)
very interesting. I enjoy the different view of the things we see in the world. Where some see little bugs and those with imagination see so much more in the world.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
very interesting
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Review by thomasmcharg Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
very interesting. sounds like you would make a great coach to youngsters and anyone who wants to reach their full potential. Adjusting visions and knowing what you are capable of can help anyone with everything in their life.
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Review of Dream poem 23  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
interesting. I have never heard of this kind of poem. I enjoyed it
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I really enjoyed this story. It's one of life's hardest questions. do you take the chance and possibly lose both or do you deal with everything now and lose only one with the option to adopt. it's never easy making that kind of decision and I don't know if I could make the choice either.
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Review by thomasmcharg Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
A valiant way to die. many people have died in wars and I hope they also had pictures of their loved ones in mind as they felt their last breath leave their bodies.
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Review of Sink In The River  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
interesting yet dark look at life and if it's worth living. It is very possible to make changes if your willing to try. those who refuse to try will sooner or later be lost and give into the darkness. Life offers chances for change every day and all you need to do is look.
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