I think I could thoroughly enjoy the poetry you have written. I really appreciate this piece....it has got everything I like -- its short, clear, brief and yet it has a deeper essence and poetic beauty to it. I would certainly like to read some more works of yours...great writing!
This was really great...I can very well relate to the feelings - passion, thrill and the desire. The best thing about it is that it is short yet powerful. The rhyme scheme and rhythm fit very well. Also, the refrain adds a nice, finishing touch. Great stuff -- I really want to read some more of your stuff.
I honestly liked reading the poem. The rhyme scheme and flow and choice of words are perfect for the theme. The ideas were very well expressed....nice writing!
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