This was a fascinating read, you painted a beautiful scene and have excellent word choice. A couple of grammar errors but other than that you did a wonderful job. Kudos!
"suspicioned" is an odd word choice, and I might recommend reworking that line and replacing it with a more fitting word, but otherwise this poem really resonated with me. I was depressed most of my childhood, and I felt very connected. I'm excited to read more of your works, great job!
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