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Review of Maybe  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A strong, simple poem

I don't care its not long, as it packs the meaning neatly into 6 lines

Very impressive, thank you !
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Review of Scraping  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I loved this.

I see the defiance and independence and non-conformity

But the guilt ? Perhaps it supposed guilt ? Or the pleasure even . Is it your secret treasure perhaps ?
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Review of A Dazed Normal  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi

Thanks for the poem !

I would always try to work on your poems again maybe a day or two after writing

I can feel the emotion but the drafting (daze twice), beseeching I think, and the last line I htink need a little work to push to the next level/ I use Gdrive and edit it regularly when I see errors or realise I'm a little way from what I meant to say

Thanks again

Tidzaman
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