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Review by Tiffy<3 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like this poem because it is unique in the way that many people would most likely not think to choose this as a topic and also the vocabulary that you used throughout the poem. The title you chose is nice because it is not over-used throughout the poem and the description probably could not have been written better. In my opinion, you did a really nice job on writing this.
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Review by Tiffy<3 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I liked this because you talk about a time that was hard to get through, but you still stayed strong. Some of the words don't rhyme but that's okay because poems don't have to rhyme. It has a really good rhythm. I think you're really good at writing and you did a good job!
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