Nicely written details and a good word flow. The Groundhog is never right it seems but we look forward to him seeing his shadow or not. A good style and easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. Spring does here. Some good reflections and well chosen words. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I pray to be forgiven all the time. I was baptized and pray all the time. Nicely written details and a good word flow. We do learn from mistakes. Some good reflections. Well defined and creative and easy to follow. A nice style. A good presentation. May good things await us all. Always: Megan
A variety of elements here. Testimony. Missing stone. Key. Departed grandparents. Some memories. Creative and colorful with well chosen words. Easy to follow. A good style. A nice scenario. Being thankful for your sin. Good call. Some neat reflections. Well written. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Tick toc. It is annoying. We think of Edgar Allan Poe and his telltale heart story. Time waits on no one. Nicely written details and a good style. Well chosen words. This is food for thought. This holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Wars still happen. My father was in Vietnam three times. I knew others who went to war and it was rough. A good style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and blends them together and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Grief. It's rough. Kind words and hugs makes it better. Some good reflections. Easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. A void in a relationship. Been there in my dating days. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. As kids, ww never know where food comes from. We just order it in the restaurant or know it comes from the store. Food for thought. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style. This makes you think. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Life changes. Breaking up hurts. Some bad reflections. You described the breakup of romances well. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful. I felt sad as I watched this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Professional Bowlers. They do win Awards. Bowling can be an essential journey. A good style and nice descriptions. Duke sounds interesting. Creative and colorful. I don't know much about bowling. Well defined with good stanzas. The words are well chosen. A good scenario. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I love Barbies and action figures of Star Wars and that. I have Chewbecca Action Figure and a stuffed Chewecca. Okay. It isn't cool when someone calls a man's action figures dolls. I had to laugh at this. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good scenario. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it would be nice if the world never had another war. Guns being silent. We wish. Some food for thought. A good style and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. Some sad reflections. Well defined. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. The best of friends. It is hard when friends live in another town. These are heartfelt words. Creative and colorful with a nice style. This is uplifting and inspiring. A neat rhyme pattern balances the words out and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman who was a loner bumped into a man literally and they became friends and more. Well rounded, shy characters. A good style and this holds the reader's interest aa we root for these two. Cute and a good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It is sad when family and friends die. Some sad reflections. We pray to God and know he had his reasons for taking people away from us. Creative and colorful and this is uplifting. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair . I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Eating fast food isn't good for us. I am guilty of it. Quite a menu here. All fast food for everyone. Good descriptions. A nice style and this holds the reader's interest. Food for thought? A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman trying to return a giant, stuffed panda and the cashier is making bear jokes. She just wants to get rid of it. Things aren't going right. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this. Looks like this was fun to write. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a man spying and taking pictures for money. He is paying off his girlfriends diamond ring and he gets a note from her thinking she is breaking up with him but it is an invitation to breakfast with her. He is ready. We'll defined and good characters. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a girl being in trouble and sneaking put of the house. Meeting a guy and taking off with him. We'll rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Looks like there could be a part 2. Flowers in the moonlight. An interesting title. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It is rough when love isn't returned. Some sad reflections and food for thought. Sub Rosa. I wasn't sure what this meant. This held my interest. Creative and colorful. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a girl and her kitty cat wonder what is going on at the mansion across the road. The girl gies over there and sees men with cameras. She sees beautiful, dressed up people and gets caught. A movie is being filmed. The girl leaves but gets a DVD a few months later. Good characters and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a dragon baby hatching in the attic and giving the girl three wishes. She wanted a flute for music class. She was worried someone was breaking in and the baby dragon made them disappear. The baby dragon said the girl could summon him anytime. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue and neat fantasy elements. A heartwarming presentation. Always: Megan
This is scary and I would hate to be in a dark, confined area. Nicely written details and this is interesting and draws the reader in. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat scenario. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and sums this up with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Seems like love is in the air. The ocean is always romantic fir a couple to walk past. Some interesting details. A good style with nice reflections. Looks like you spent time with this and put some thought into this. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman becoming a Certified Public Accountant. She wonders if she made the right decision. I think we all think that we picked the wrong career. Food for thought. This holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. Interesting. Always: Megan
Seems like the man trying to meet this woman, didn't go as planned. She was already spoken for and he was bad mouthing her before he talked to her. Nicely written details and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Looks like you spent time with this. Entertaining. Always: Megan
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