Nicely written details and I am not a fan of Roman Soldiers but I felt sympathy for Marius. You gave good reasons that support Marius's views and his dedication as a Roman Soldier. He was dedicated but felt he had been wronged. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Excellent writing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and the darkness can be sad and lonely. You see things differently in the daylight. A good style and easy to follow. Darkness can be a curse. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters. Sad when a friend behaves like a bully. Been there. A friend burning your arm with a cigarette. Not cool. A magician for a friend who was mean so the friend of the magician decided to leave. He walked away. Good call. Well rounded characters and this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I went to a small Catgolic College but didn't live there. I haven't got in touch with my college friends but two became millionaires. A woman wanted to be with you later you went to college with but it was too late. I get that. House parties. I only went to one party. I appreciate your memories. Well written. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman baking pies for the fair. A little boy steals one and the woman tells his mother and no fair for him. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this. The kid has a good technique fir stealing the pie but he got caught. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and good reflections. To see her. Beauty. Vision. Heart. Dream. Future. Bright. Simplicity. Grace. Some good words. Neat romantic sentiments and overtures. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good play on words. Geminians. Interesting. Looks like you researched this and the words play out well. Some character traits about Geminians. A nice style and good scenario. Too all people aren't like that. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and there is a way to get back attached spam artist. My grandma always said she had lived and I didn't know what she meant until I get older. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We remember school days and our life changes. Some good reflections and some sad ones. A nice style with well chosen words. A good scenario. A good style and I think high school stirs up old memories and some aren't good. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and he cares. A good reminder and devotional that Jesus is always with us. Being fearful of him takes on a different meaning. He loves us. We serve him and love him. This is uplifting, inspiring and enlightening. Beautifully stayed. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a girl named Holly Frost feels like she in on her guard because he is watching her. She thinks Nicholas is an alien. He reminds her of her naughty behavior and she tries to see the joy of Christmas and it's meaning. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good style. I enjoyed reading this. This is uplifting. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word. An artist has passion and I wish I could do art work. This is creative and colorful. Some good imagery and a nice style. This holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair . A nice presentation. Always: Megan.
I am lousy at directions. I get lost. Nicely written details and looks like one needs GPS. A good style and easy to follow. Mathematical genuine I am not but I like the concept. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in circulation and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I always tell myself that roo shall pass. Abe. He was right. Looks like you spent time with this and researched this. Easy to follow. Some good reflections. Life can be a roller coaster. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I sometimes wonder if trees can think or feel. Good descriptions. Nice reflections. Easy to follow and a good style. The tree likes another tree but if the tree isn't near by, when will the trees see each other? A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I have heard if women marrying a man because they liked his last name. So, this woman was named Alice and now her last name is Wonderland. I had to smile at this. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a person writing a book. A man in Mexico. The person in the story has money in their cat and no idea how it got there. Interesting concept. Good characters and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Hopelessly in love and not returned. Good reflections. Easy to follow. The smartest man standing alone. Broken heart. A good play on words. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details with well rounded characters heading to the moon. Some anxiety here. Thinking will it be like earth? Good characters with suitable dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. Finding a planet like earth would be neat. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we have dreams of being a teenager or being younger. We wake up and think is that a bad thing? Easy to follow and Ted thinking of doing better in business and improving things. Good characters. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and your grandfather sounded like he was old school. I remember spats shoes. Good descriptions and a nice style. This holds the reader's interest. Queen Victoria popped her clogs. I wasn't sure what this meant but this is different. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman having the measles while pregnant may have problems. Sad for the baby. The dog barking. What was the dog barking at? Dogs know things we don't sometimes and we need to pay attention. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This draws the reader in. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a sad anniversary when the one partner is sick. The wife took care of her husband and got a nice gift of a sapphire necklace and ring. They seem happy. There's a later day to celebrate when tge husband gets well. Well rounded characters and a good story line. Well written. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and good reflections. Barely breathing. Somedays, we feel like this. Food for thought. Creative and this sets the mood. I hope the person in the poem gets a better outlook on things. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is sad in some countries, couples don't marry for love. Rich and high class people marry in their own class. This is the case in this story. A couple in love bring tortured and executed. Sad. Good characters and in depth details. A good presentation. Always: Megan
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