Nicely written details and a good word flow. A good scenario and some good romantic sentiments and overtures. Lovely reflections. A woman who is a Goddess is special. You don't want to be without that person. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
This is off to a good start. Why couldn't the vampire be a daywalker? Sad really. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. You feel sorry for the young man. Hopefully, things worked out for him. A good title for this story. Origins of a vampire. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Guess our mind can be like a bucket. I think our minds hold more then a bucket. Nicely written details and easy to follow. A good style with food for thought. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful. We do need communication and conversation. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a little boy wanting to get a dog and he finds one. The father has to approve. The father comes home and the dog jumps on him. The father meets the dog and looks like things are a go. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and Grandad sounds like he was a wonderful man. Marathons ate a lot of work but a good thing. Well defined and a nice style. This holds the reader's interest. May I suggest to double space when starting a new paragraph or paragraph? Just being helpful. Well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a girls brother taking pictures of her in the shower and one is holding a knife. They want to put it on video. She goes along with it and says she is sending it to their parents. They need to get on their knees and ask for forgiveness and she will put it on YouTube and forgive them. They got their just desserts. Well rounded characters and entertaining. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. The holidays are nice and the food and the smells. Some good reflections. Neat imagery with well chosen words. A nice style and good scenario. Looks like you spent time with this. This makes me happy for the holidays. Great presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and chocolate and cookies are always nice. This is delicious and tasteful. Sugars. Dancing. Playing. Swirling. Whispering. Chocolate afterglow taste. A good scenario. Some well chosen words. A short passage says a lot. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good reflections. It is nice to think of someone as an angel. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. A good scenario and well chosen words. A nice style. Some neat romantic sentiments. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we don't need to get all dressed up just to stay home. We do exist beyond the image. Good call. Food for thought. A good style and easy to follow. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Beauty is only skin deep. Always: Megan
This is interesting. Nordic. Wizards. Fairies and elf's. Working at a job. Some well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Good names. Looks like you spent time with this. Some good fantasy elements. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some sad reflections but I get it. I don't always have good days. We do have dreams. This is creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in order and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this is uplifting and inspiring. Some words to live by. Some good words of wisdom. A good Devotional. I do call on God a lot. I am glad we have him in our lives. Thanks for expressing your thoughts on Jesus and God. Beautifully stated. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and children make up stories and make you laugh. They can lie but make a story entertaining. Looks like this was fun to write. A cloud went in his sister's room and bought him a candy bar. So, he became a writer. Creative and colorful. Always: Megan
Down Syndrome people are amazing and can do more then we give them credit for. This young woman is successful and proves she can do things in spite of her Down Syndrome. Well defined and impressive. looks like you spent time with this and researched this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a man sending his nephews on a snipe hunt. I always thought a snipe was a bird that would het in a bag with a flashlight shining in it. So, the boys found a snake and sent it to visit the elderly man. The man saw the snake and was scared. Me, too. I appreciate the humor in this. Well rounded characters and a humorous story line. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I would rather ride a train then a tram or hitchhike. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Freeways are so annoying. Creative and colorful. Well chosen words and a good scenario. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we do need God in times of trouble. I know I do. This is inspiring and enlightening as well as uplifting. God is love and hope. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. This is spiritually sound. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters with suitable dialogue. Grandad was good at gardening. The aliens found out and came down to get him against his will. His grandson dedicated his life to building a rocketship and wanted to go get him. Some good action. Easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and writers pass on but live on through their writings. Some good reflections about you and your achievements. A good style and well defined. Well structured. A good eulogy. Well chosen words and this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Measuring each drop of sand that flows through the Hourglass. Lasting changes in style. The trials of the unwashed. Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style with food for thought. We do go through trials of life. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and love is a journey and sometimes we will have bumpy roads. The journey will seem long when times are bad.Some good reflections and food for thought. Looks like you spent time with this. Well defined and creative writing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Advice to live by. We do need to find peace within ourselves. Sometimes, it isn't easy. We pray and fund our way. Calm, peaceful days help. Some good reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good romantic sentiments and overtures along with lovely reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. This holds the reader's interest. A good style and well structured words. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Love is always on the horizon. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We get older and our bodies change. We cherish every blessing we get. Easy to follow with some good reflections. Looks like you spent time with this . A good style. Well chosen words. We hope each day will be better. We'll defined. Always: Megan
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