Nicely written details and a child wanting to borrow money for his friend to buy his mother a Birthday gift. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A nice young man. Creative and colorful. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Two prompts to work on. Prompts help writers create. A good style and nice scenario. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we crush on a boy and then realize they aren't all that. A girl holding hands with a boy she has a crush on and finds out he cheated on tests and thinks he is a football star and school isn't important. The girl thinks she would rather be with the boy who helped her present crush cheat. A good style and well rounded characters with suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I guess I didn't know love has a place to go to, to die. Some interesting deal and a good imagination at work. Grave danger. Interesting title. Creative and colorful. This holds the reader's attention. Well chosen words. A little scary. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Seems like Mary had quite a garden. This is creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. Good imagery and neat descriptions. A good scenario. This holds the reader's interest. A nice rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this holds the reader's interest. A ruby heart necklace seems to have a hard life. It wants to be sold and it gets stolen and isn't a appreciated piece of jewelry. A good style and looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful. I hate seeing jewelry being abused. Always: Megan
The poor man spending his Birthday in the hospital. Nicely written details and well rounded characters. The mysterious cake with the green frosting. A surprise present. Creative and colorful with good descriptions. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we are glad you are here. I took up writing after a friend reminded me I went to a two year college to get a Journalism Degree. I went the nursing route. I started writing again. I appreciate your journey writing a novel and joining WDC. Some good views about writing and this made me smile. This holds the reader's interest. Wishing you the best. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and two poems here. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Deciding what to do about going on vacation. Forest or the sea. Deciding to stay home. Cat in a tree meowing and stuck wanting a lady cat. I appreciate the humor in this. A good style. Well written. A neat rhyme pattern puts sums up these poems Nicely. Always: Megan
I seem to be finding your items today. Nicely written details and it is sad when a divorce happens and families are split apart. Small faces and children don't understand why. Maybe adults don't, either. Creative and colorful. Well defined. A good presentation. Always; Megan
Nicely written details and this is uplifting, inspiring and enlightening. God does guide our steps and way. A good style and easy to follow. A nice word flow. Well chosen words. I enjoyed the Bible Passage from Psalms. A good devotional and words to live by. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Love peeked out. We never know when love will find us. We do have love for family and friends and pur pets. A good style and easy to follow. Well chosen words. Creative and colorful. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and good reflections. Trees do have history and can tell stories if they could talk. A good style and well defined concepts. Creative and colorful. This holds the reader's interest. Some food for thought. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sounds like the zombies got around. I was in tune with this. Settlers. Zombies are Settlers. A good style and looks like this was fun to write. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and sums this up nicely. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters with suitable dialogue. I used to work in nursing in mental health and never knew what would set a patient off. We had patience? Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some well mannered zombies. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. I appreciate the humor in this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
This part of Australia sounds spooky. I think of kangaroos and koloa bears and Olivia Newton John. I know spiders and snakes live everywhere. Nicely written details and a good word flow. This holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and handing down items to family is a good thing. A scarf can be interesting. A ring is usually handed down to family members or maybe a quilt. A good style and well rounded characters. Well defined and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes, kids play the bad guy and then he grows up to be bad. Sad. Well rounded characters and two boys who liked playing cowboys. A nice style and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Some good details and a variety of words describing the ups and downs of life. A good style and looks like you spent time with this. Dealing with life. It isn't easy. Well chosen words. I took in every word. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It is nice when love lasts forever. A good style and some food for thought. This is cheery makes a person smile. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and wraps this up nicely with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. Lab dogs who are loved. I love their antics. Good descriptions. This is cheery and makes one smile. Neat imagery. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Cute. I love the cover picture. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Living our dreams. Competitive. Seems like this is what it is all about. A good style and easy to follow. Food for thought. This holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. When we have bad days, it is upsetting. We look for answers. A good style and easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. Our souls are important. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Vacation. They were always nice. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Fresh cookies. Vibrant moments. A memory box of memories. Good call. Some good reflections. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always:;Megan
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