Nicely written details and all students shown to be monitors secretly keeping law and order. Good one. Kids dancing on the desk, blowing bubbles. A helpful grandmother who was a teacher and principal. A good style with well rounded characters. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some nice warm sentiments. Friendships break up and they hurt. We do cherish the good aspects of our relationships and do our best. Looks like you spent time with this. Some good reflections and heartwarming. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Loved. It is nice to be loved. You worry that someone you love will be alright when you are gone. Some good reflections and nice sentiments and overtures. A happy style and easy to follow with well chosen words. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
A letter in a Bible. The person wrote it but didn't want his mother to know. Some good reflections and some not so good. We never know what kind of letters or items we will find in a Bible. My mother died recently and I found interesting things in her
Bible. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A good ending. The person turning into a bull in a field after reading the letter and a bright light appears. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and two ladies opening a flower shop. A caterpillar by the tea. I thought of Alice in Wonderland. Cute. This draws the reader in. The flower pots are arranged and they wait for the first customer. A black cat comes waltzing in. Cute and bizarre with good characters. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes a student meets someone when she is ready to Starr a class and she finds the person interesting. She meets other students and goes to class. She finds the man she was talking to is her professor. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Accusations. We need to be careful when we accuse people. Sometimes, we know when people are guilty. A good style. Unworthy words and deeds. This happens. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a cow convention. The cows have a tale to tell. Looks like you spent time with this. Cows make for good characters. I was in tune with this. A good style. This is cheery and cute. I would rather eat chicken then cows. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this woman has had quite a life with someone she loved in Paris. They were separated and a jacket was the link to get them back together. A good style with strong characters. Looks like you spent time with this. A good plot line. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a call from a ghost uncle. He tells his niece a storm is coming and hide the children upstairs and get a gun out of his safe. A call from beyond. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Some good eerie concepts. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I worry and pray when my husband is late. I am relieved like Greta when he finally comes home. I get it. Nicely written details and good characters. Suitable dialogue. Great likes quoting Shakespeare. I remember Macbeth. A good style and nice romantic overtures and sentiments. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and an interesting character this woman. She works at her parents hotel and hangs around the beach the rest of the time. She finds trash left by tourists. She finds a skull of an ancient corpse with a message that if it us disturbed, the person finding it will suffer in gruesome fashion. A good style and scary. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation and nice scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Silence sometimes speaks louder then words. Silence can be it's own language. Some well chosen words. Creative and colorful. Silence and no fighting. A good style. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Looks like Greek Mythology plays an important role here. Apollo. Hyacinth. Some good concepts. This holds the reader's. A nice style. Creative and well defined. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and sums this up with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and planning to use a sleigh in the snow and seems like the odds were against you. I hate when you make nice plans and everything is against you. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat scenario. Easy to follow. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a perfect murder it seems. Well rounded characters. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. A masquerade. A mystery for the police. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and making a game plan and trying to make it a reality. Pleasing a professor. Seems hard. Looks like the person is determined and succeed at this. An alien in the end? Interesting. Good characters and a nice style. This holds the reader's interest. Maybe a touch of Sci Fi thrown in. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I have had friends like these two scoundrels. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. A good style and this is creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern lines the words up nicely and gives this a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good reflections and autumn early evening sounds nice. Glowing embers. Ducks. A nice scene. A good style and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: megan
Nicely written details and people disappear into thin air. You read on and a woman pushed a button and everyone disappeared. Aliens are living among us and the one alien has a lot to learn it seems. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I have heard when one child has a Birthday, the parents buy a gift or two for the other child and allow them a friend to come over. This is cute and easy to follow. Looks like the Birthday party went well. Well rounded characters and this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
The poor kid thought he found a fake bar then a zoo when he saw parrots. He had run away from home but the police found him at the fake bar. Some good descriptions and imagery. Easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. A good style. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good romantic sentiments and overtures. A poor good man who is lonesome but he had Maggie and she had him. I almost cried as I read this. A good style with well rounded characters. This holds the reader's interest. A quilt for George made from Maggie. A beautiful presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a visit to the cemetery is never fun. We know the ones we loved are at peace now. Ww think what if. Some good reflections and some sad ones. Looks like you spent time with this. Good descriptions and a good style. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I think we all get writers block. Good descriptions with a nice style and well chosen words. Looks like you spent time with this. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. Somedays, it is easier to write then other times. A good presentation. Always: Megan
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