Nicely written details and a man who looks like Santa Claus is unfriendly and eats his chocolates right in front of children. He won't share. He is crabby. When the man dies, no one misses him and he was alone all his life. This holds the reader's interest. Well written. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I love you are the most important words in the world. A good style and some good romantic sentiments and overtures. Creative with good reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and as we get older, we remember our younger years. An elderly man wearing a Stetson. Silver hair fox. Good descriptions and neat scenario. Every yesterday. Good term and nice concept. This holds the reader's interest. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and being stuck in the woods. Friends deserting a person. Being stuck in a tree. A mountain lion. Interesting scenario. The mountain lion is a well rounded character. Fireworks. Some action and suspense. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation and fireworks going off and scaring the mountain lion. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I read this but I think this is updated. I am reading and reviewing again. Betsy. A girl's nickname. She likes to do repairs. Her husband is going to be late. She is busy doing repairs. A well rounded character. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this again. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters with suitable dialogue. Jasmine. A forced marriage. A good style. Some good descriptions and this holds the reader's interest. Jasmine is going to make the best of it. Aladdin. Jasmine decided he was wonderful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Love can be beautiful and people do get hurt. Some good reflections and some sad ones. Easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words motion and rounds this out with a good flair. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Wintry Wonderland. Good imagery and nice descriptions. Lovely reflections. Creative and colorful. This holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Great presentation. Always: Megan
I do like teens and they can be compassionate towards people and animals even homeless people. Nicely written details and this holds the reader's interest. Heartwarming and well defined. A good style. Creative and I was in tune with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and returning a oversized panda. The clerk doesn't want to accept it. A good style and looks like you spent time with this. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some interesting sports mentioned. I will always like ice skating best. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Some well chosen words. Creative and colorful. Biofeedback rally. Olympics. They are a fun event. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I love writing about friendly dragons. A young girl being used for a sacrifice to keep peace with the dragon. The dragon pretends he kills the people bought to him and let's them go. A villager is suspicious and learns the dragon is deceiving them. The dragon and young girl leave the land. A good style and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A neat scenario and well defined. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a eleven year old boy discovers he is the principal of the school and a full grown man after he was alone in the library. S magical library. The little boy loved the library. This holds the reader's interest. Well rounded characters. A good presentation and neat scenario. Suggestion: Double space when starting new dialogue and a new paragraph. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman is handy with tools. She knows her husband will be late and she is content to do repais around the house. A well rounded character. She thinks of her departed father and I get that. Heartwarming and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details of an interesting creature. Chimera. Good descriptions and this holds the reader's interest. Sounds scary. A hybrid of some kind. Creative and colorful. I don't think I want to meet him. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. This is uplifting, inspiring and enlightening. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Some neat spiritual aspects. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I hate house cleaning day. Laundry and dishes. Something spill and extra work happens. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Creative and colorful. Errands. They are always there. Looks like you spent time with this. A nice style. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Some neat details and food for thought. A nice style. Raise hands and pray. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. We do think about things and hope for the best. A unusual title for a poem. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. 100 percent real. That is what we want things to be. A good style and easy to follow. Some good reflections. A reality check. A good style. This holds the reader's interest. Well chosen words. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Blood tests. I was in tge hospital hooked to IVS and getting blood tests and I swear they hit a bone because they ran out of room to fund skin for a blood test. I get the anxiety here. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful . A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and wraps this up nicely. A neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. My father fought in Vietnam and was hard to understand but he and I were in a great place the past 20 years. A good style and easy to follow with nice reflections. A good style and well chosen words. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Quiet rooms are nice. This holds the reader's interest. A good style and easy to follow. Some good reflections. Neat imagery. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern can be found and puts the words in potential. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I don't get the concept of golf but this holds the reader's interest. Good descriptions and well chosen words with a good style. True rewards of golf. Okay. I like watching Alice Coopers Golf Tournament. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good memories and some sad memories for this family. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A walk in the woods seems to help. This holds the reader's interest. Creative and well defined. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sounds like Moss Froggy likes eating flies and sitting on the likybpad on the pond. She loves her kids. Some good imagery and nice reflections. A good scenario. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and wraps this up with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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