This was very well written and I would enjoy reading more of it. The style is very similar to many of the books I pleasure read and the character detail was well done. A little more detail on the story backgound would have been nice, but as a part of a larger story that would have been covered in a previous chapter. I would have liked more detail on the setup of the room during this short battle for the mental imagery, but the technical aspects of the the story were great and I enjoyed reading it. I will be looking for more!
This is a very touching poem and the pain you went through is visible. People tend to be so into themselves they don't think about how their actions affect their children. I appreciate your sharing this and I think it can inspire others in a similar situation to heal from the emotional wounds it causes.
Technically it is very well written, the style is strong and the poem is not at all cryptic. Thank you for sharing it - It was a very enjoyable read.
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